etani gahari soch , etane bade vichar or insani samaaj ko aage aanewale samay ki eklta se agaah karane wali kahani aapne likhi hai gopal khrishan ji... behad umda bat kahi hai aapne .bs youn hi aage badhiye hum to ye soch rahe hain ki aap ki shuruwat etani achhi hai to aage to hume or bhi achhha chha padhane ko milega or hum aapse salah suggestions lenge ...
No suggestions.....just be who u r ......if i'll give suggestions, then u will lose ur originality.....so just write wht comes in ur mind.....all the members of MHF r vry supportive .....btw ur story was really gud.....keep it up.............