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Rahul.jha 07-02-2017 10:38 AM
Mujhe pata tha...!
 

Bikhar rahi thi unki zindagi,
Wo kehna chahte they yea baat, mujhe pata tha..!

Her jeet wo apni mere naam kar rahe the,
Wo mante the ishme apni haar, mujhe pata tha..!

Wo sath they to safar kitna aasan tha,
bohot mushkil hoga yea safar bin unke, mujhe pata tha..!

Ab wo nahi hain to bikhar rahi hai meri zindagi,
Aur keh na paunga main unse yea baat... Shayad unhe pata tha...!!

Deep_ 09-02-2017 03:43 PM
Re: Mujhe pata tha...!
 
Quote:
Originally Posted by Rahul.jha (Post 560335)

Her jeet wo apni mere naam kar rahe the,
Wo mante the ishme apni haar, mujhe pata tha..!
:bravo:

Pavitra 10-02-2017 09:44 PM
Re: Mujhe pata tha...!
 
Quote:
Originally Posted by Rahul.jha (Post 560335)

Wo sath they to safar kitna aasan tha,
bohot mushkil hoga yea safar bin unke, mujhe pata tha..!
:bravo: बहुत अच्छी पंक्तियां

soni pushpa 10-02-2017 11:08 PM
Re: Mujhe pata tha...!
 
खुबसूरत रचना हमसे शेयर करने के लिए धन्यवाद सह बधाइयाँ

rajnish manga 14-02-2017 11:50 AM
Re: Mujhe pata tha...!
 
आप की सोच में तथा अभिव्यक्ति में झील सी गहराई है तथा गंभीरता है. संबंधों की कोमलता तथा उनके उतार-चढ़ाव से हो कर गुज़रने का अनुभव आपने बड़ी संवेदनशीलता के साथ अपने शब्दों में ढाला है. बधाई व धन्यवाद, राहुल जी.




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