Rat gujar gayi -shikha
Raat gujar gayi unki hi baaho mai,
Or zindgi fisalati chali gayi pyar mai. Unke preet ki chadar ko tan pe lapete, Baheti gayi unki saanso ki rawani mai . Vo nadan sa mausam tha pur bahar mai, Dil bhi to nahi tha humare bas mai. Unki saanso mai samane lagi thi mai, Muhobbat ki simaye mitane lagi thi mai. Bevajah dhundhne nikli thi rab ko mai, Rab to humesha se tha meri hi saanso mai. Shikha |
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Thanks a lot rajnishji.....Hindi Mai nahi likh paa rahe uske liye mafi chahte hai
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प्रयास जारी रखें. trial & error के सहारे आप इस विषय में आगे बढ़ सकते हैं. लेकिन आपकी कविता की गुणवत्ता इन सब से ऊपर है. धन्यवाद. |
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