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Old 08-11-2011, 04:25 PM   #1
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Default Kaho Aisa Karoge Tum?

Hello friends......

Sadiyo Se ek Spna Hai mera Kaho Pura Karoge Tum
Bhul Jao Mere Siwa Sab Kuch Kaho Aisa Karoge Tum

Nahi Kuch aur Tamana Abb....K Bas Mere Ho Jao Tum..
Kabi Na hume Chhod K Jaoge

Kaho Aisa Karoge Tum?

Mila ke palkein yun apni palkon se...
apne saare gam kya mujhe doge tum?
Bus ek lafz Sunne Ko Kai Barso se Tarse Hai
Muje apna bana lo.....

Kaho Aisa Karoge Tum?

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Old 08-11-2011, 04:34 PM   #2
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sadiyo se ek spna hai mera kaho pura karoge tum
bhul jao mere siwa sab kuch kaho aisa karoge tum

nahi kuch aur tamana abb....k bas mere ho jao tum..
Kabi na hume chhod k jaoge

kaho aisa karoge tum?

Mila ke palkein yun apni palkon se...
Apne saare gam kya mujhe doge tum?
Bus ek lafz sunne ko kai barso se tarse hai
muje apna bana lo.....

Kaho aisa karoge tum?

काजल जी की एक उम्दा रचना..... फोरम के लिए देवनागरी मे -


सदियों से एक सपना है मेरा,
कहो पूरा करोगे तुम?
भूल जाओ मेरे सिवा सब कुछ,
कहो ऐसा करोगे तुम?

कभी ना हमे छोड़ के जाओगे
कहो ऐसा करोगे तुम?

मिला के पलकें यूं अपनी पलकों से,
अपने सारे गम क्या मुझे दोगे तुम?

बस एक लफ्ज सुनने को कई बरसो से तरसे है,
मुझे अपना बना लो.......

कहो ऐसा कहोगे तुम?
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hello friends......

Sadiyo se ek spna hai mera kaho pura karoge tum
bhul jao mere siwa sab kuch kaho aisa karoge tum

nahi kuch aur tamana abb....k bas mere ho jao tum..
Kabi na hume chhod k jaoge

kaho aisa karoge tum?

Mila ke palkein yun apni palkon se...
Apne saare gam kya mujhe doge tum?
Bus ek lafz sunne ko kai barso se tarse hai
muje apna bana lo.....

Kaho aisa karoge tum?
काजल जी ,
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