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Old 13-04-2012, 07:44 PM   #41
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Old 25-04-2012, 11:50 AM   #42
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दास्ताँ ए गम छुपाई न गयी बात दिल की बताई न गयी


हँसते देखा था हरदम जिसे आज वो फिर हमसे रुलाई न गयी

ख़ुशी उनकी में मेरा गम छुपा है

अपना गम मिटाने को उनकी खुशी मिटाई न गई'

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Old 25-04-2012, 01:44 PM   #43
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दास्ताँ ए गम छुपाई न गयी बात दिल की बताई न गयी


हँसते देखा था हरदम जिसे आज वो फिर हमसे रुलाई न गयी

ख़ुशी उनकी में मेरा गम छुपा है

अपना गम मिटाने के उनकी ख़ुशी मिटाई न गयी
वाह-वाह सोमवीर भाई! ' अपना गम मिटाने को उनकी खुशी मिटाई न गई'
बहुत खूब!
सोम भाई जी, बहुत ही आसान भाषा में बहुत अच्छा कह लेते हैं।
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Old 25-04-2012, 01:53 PM   #44
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इंसानियत का तुझमें दीदार नहीं होता/
तू सच में इंसान है एतबार नहीं होता/
गर तू वाकई इंसान है तो बता 'सौरभ',
क्यों किसी इंसान से तुझे प्यार नहीं होता/

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Old 25-04-2012, 02:14 PM   #45
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नफ़रत की बेड़ी काट दो तुम/
भेद-भाव की खाई पाट दो तुम/
आग लगाने से अँधेरा नहीं जाता,
चराग़-ए-मोहब्बत जलाके अँधेरा छाँट दो तुम/

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Old 25-04-2012, 07:24 PM   #46
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क्षोभरहित मेरी कोई निशा न थी/
चलता रहा किन्तु कोई दिशा न थी/
जागृत की जीने की आकांक्षा तुमने,
अन्यथा मेरी अब जिजीविषा न थी/

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Old 25-04-2012, 08:56 PM   #47
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थोड़ा हँस लिया जाये-
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मेरे होटों से वादों का फूल झड़ता।
मेरे पीछे भी जनता का रेला उमड़ता।
काश कि मुझे भी जनता को उल्लू बनाना आता,
तो मैं भी इस बार चुनाव जरूर लड़ता।

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Old 25-04-2012, 11:13 PM   #48
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वाह-वाह सोमवीर भाई! ' अपना गम मिटाने को उनकी खुशी मिटाई न गई'

बहुत खूब!
सोम भाई जी, बहुत ही आसान भाषा में बहुत अच्छा कह लेते हैं।
kum padha likha hun isliye kathin bhasha samajh me nahi aati jodil me aata kaha deta bas
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kum padha likha hun isliye kathin bhasha samajh me nahi aati jodil me aata kaha deta bas
अच्छा मजाक है ये! हा हा हा
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Old 26-04-2012, 09:14 AM   #50
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रहम मुझ पर ज़रा कीजिए।
सूखे ज़ख़्मों को न हरा कीजिए।
मर चुका हूँ ज़िन्दा लाश हूँ मैं,
मरे हुए पर यूँ न मरा कीजिए।

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