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Old 23-06-2015, 10:19 PM   #1091
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रौशनी है तो रौशनी से है
वरना अँधा मकान है, है क्या
और आगे चलेंगे दम ले कर
इक ज़रा सी थकान है, है क्या

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क्या क्या रोग लगे हैं दिल को क्या क्या उनके भेद
हम सबको समझाने वाले, कौन हमें समझाए
एक इसी उम्मीद पे हैं सब दुश्मन दोस्त क़ुबूल
क्या जाने इस सादा-रवीं में कौन कहाँ मिल जाएँ.........


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Old 24-06-2015, 06:15 PM   #1092
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क्या क्या रोग लगे हैं दिल को क्या क्या उनके भेद
हम सबको समझाने वाले, कौन हमें समझाए
एक इसी उम्मीद पे हैं सब दुश्मन दोस्त क़ुबूल
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एक दो बूँदें निदामत के पसीने की बहुत
डूबने के वास्ते दरिया नहीं लगता मुझको

(निदामत = पश्चाताप)

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Old 24-06-2015, 07:01 PM   #1093
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एक दो बूँदें निदामत के पसीने की बहुत
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Old 24-06-2015, 10:48 PM   #1094
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भुलाई नही जाती मुझे उनकी वफा,
वो खुदगर्ज हो गए तो मै क्या करू...........


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रुकता नहीं वक़्त कभी भी किसी के चले जाने से
ज़िंदगी भी ठहरती नहीं कभी किसी के भी जाने से
वक़्त की रफ़्तार नहीं बदलती किसी के जाने से मगर
ज़िंदगी की रफ़्तार बदल जाती है किसी अपने के जाने से
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Old 25-06-2015, 10:36 PM   #1095
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रुकता नहीं वक़्त कभी भी किसी के चले जाने से
ज़िंदगी भी ठहरती नहीं कभी किसी के भी जाने से
वक़्त की रफ़्तार नहीं बदलती किसी के जाने से मगर
ज़िंदगी की रफ़्तार बदल जाती है किसी अपने के जाने से
बंसी जी, आप थोड़ी कोशिश करें तो किसी अच्छे शायर का कलाम ढूंढ सकते है. उपरोक्त कविता 'महफ़िल' सेक्शन के अपने किसी सूत्र में पोस्ट कर सकते हैं. धन्यवाद.
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रुकता नहीं वक़्त कभी भी किसी के चले जाने से
ज़िंदगी भी ठहरती नहीं कभी किसी के भी जाने से
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ज़िंदगी की रफ़्तार बदल जाती है किसी अपने के जाने से

सम्भाले तो हूँ खुदको, तुझ बिन मगर;
जो छू ले कोई तो बिखर जाऊं मैं........


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Old 28-06-2015, 08:20 PM   #1097
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कुछ खटकता था मेरे सीने में लेकिन आख़िर,
जिसको दिल कहते थे सो तीर का पैकाँ निकला..........


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लुटाता रहा खून मैं हर तरफ
मिरे दर पे दुनिया सवाली न थी
बिला वज्ह तुम तो खफा हो गए
मुहब्बत मिरे यार गाली न थी

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लुटाता रहा खून मैं हर तरफ
मिरे दर पे दुनिया सवाली न थी
बिला वज्ह तुम तो खफा हो गए
मुहब्बत मिरे यार गाली न थी

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था इक इंतज़ार सा अब नज़र में वो भी नहीं
सफ़र में मरने की फ़ुर्सत थी घर में वो भी नहीं..........

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Old 29-06-2015, 08:24 AM   #1099
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था इक इंतज़ार सा अब नज़र में वो भी नहीं
सफ़र में मरने की फ़ुर्सत थी घर में वो भी नहीं..........

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हर दिन थोड़ी खुशहाली दे
फिर होली दे दीवाली दे
सर्द सफ़ेद लहू है सबका
सरगर्मी ला औ' लाली दे

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हर दिन थोड़ी खुशहाली दे
फिर होली दे दीवाली दे
सर्द सफ़ेद लहू है सबका
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दिल में यूँ बेदार होते हैं ख़यालाते-ग़ज़ल,
आँख मलते जिस तरह उट्ठे कोई मस्ते-शबाब........


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