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Old 20-08-2013, 12:51 AM   #131
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तुम होते ऐसा होता
तुम ना होते तो क्या होता
तुम ना होते ना मैं हँसता
तुम ना होते तो ना आज मैं रोता
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सच बात ये है जालिम गर तुम ना होते तो
यार चैन की नींद , मैं आज सो रहा होता
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Old 20-08-2013, 10:25 AM   #132
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तुम होते ऐसा होता
तुम ना होते तो क्या होता
तुम ना होते ना मैं हँसता
तुम ना होते तो ना आज मैं रोता
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सच बात ये है जालिम गर तुम ना होते तो
यार चैन की नींद , मैं आज सो रहा होता


रोने, सोने और उसके होने की समीकरण आपने खोज ही ली, सोमबीर जी. हास्य-व्यंग्य की इस छोटी लेकिन रोचक रचना के लिए धन्यवाद.
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Old 20-08-2013, 06:14 PM   #133
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बहुत सुन्दर सोमबीर जी, लेकिन हास्य व्यंग्य के बीच मुकेशजी का एक गाना याद आ गया

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Old 28-09-2013, 10:18 PM   #134
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सँजो कर बैठा हु उनकी यादों को आज भी
बीते हुये लम्हो की माला पिरोना चाहता हूँ
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Old 28-09-2013, 10:19 PM   #135
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सुख चुका है आंखो का तेरे इंतेजार में
मिलने की खुशी आंखे भिगोना चाहता हु
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Old 28-09-2013, 10:48 PM   #136
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सँजो कर बैठा हु उनकी यादों को आज भी
बीते हुये लम्हो की माला पिरोना चाहता हूँ
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सुख चुका है आंखो का तेरे इंतेजार में
मिलने की खुशी आंखे भिगोना चाहता हु
सोमबीर जी, बहुत दिन बाद आपके दर्शन हो रहे हैं. खैर, सुन्दर कविताओं के लिये हार्दिक धन्यवाद स्वीकार करें.

प्रिय! आपके दीदार को आँखें तरस गयीं.
सावन की रुत है बादलों जैसी बरस गयीं.
बिरहा ने अपना राग सुना कर रुला दिया
मिलने के बाद हां, मेरी आँखें सरस गयीं.
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Old 22-12-2013, 09:29 PM   #137
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याद उसकी फिर से मुझे तड़पाने आयी
दिल के दर्द को फिर से थोडा बढ़ने आयी

डाल कर नमक आंसुओ का मेरे जख्मो पे
दुश्मनी और एक नयी वो निभाने आयी

खुद करके बेवफाई मुझसे जिंदगी भर
सबक वफ़ा का वो मुझ को सिखाने आयी
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Old 22-12-2013, 10:43 PM   #138
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बहुत सुन्दर, सोमबीर जी. बहुत दिन बाद आपका आगमन सुखदायी है.
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Old 04-01-2014, 11:34 PM   #139
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ताजमहल इक और बना देता तू जो गर मेरी हो जाती
दुनिया को कद्द्मो में तेरे झुका देता तू जो मेरी हो जाती
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Old 20-03-2014, 10:56 PM   #140
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तेरी जिंदगी में एक वो भी दिन खुदा हो
जिस दिन तू भी अपने महबूब से जुदा हो

खुशिया से हो तू भी दूर दो पल के लिए
तेरा अपना भी कोई कभी गुमशुदा हो

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