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Old 06-09-2012, 12:05 AM   #1
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Default छोड़ के तेरे शहर की महफ़िलों को ...

मौत की ख्वाहिश लेकर जिन्दगी से नाता तोड़ लिया !

छोड़ के तेरे शहर की महफ़िलों को जंगल से नाता जोड़ लिया !!




जाने के बाद तू मुझको जितना याद करेगा!

दिल भी तुम्हारा रोयेगा फ़रियाद करेगा !!



तनहाइयों में अक्सर तलासेगा मुझको तू !

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प्यार की चाहत में हम खा कर दगा बैठे !!



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Old 14-09-2012, 11:54 PM   #2
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धन्यवाद डॉ साहब कविता पढ़ने और विचार प्रकट करने के लिए आपका बहूत बहूत धन्यावाद
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सोमबीर जी, बहुत सुन्दर. नए विचार, नया अन्दाज़. बधाई एवं शुभकामनाएं.
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सोमबीर जी, बहुत सुन्दर. नए विचार, नया अन्दाज़. बधाई एवं शुभकामनाएं.

rajnish bahoot bahoot dhanya kavita padhane vichar dne ke liye

agr aap haryanvi shokin hai mere is sutra par aaiye

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