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Old 16-08-2016, 09:41 AM   #1
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15 अगस्त (स्वतंत्रता दिवस) के अवसर पर कई सुंदर रचनाएं फेसबुक तथा अन्य स्थानों पर पढ़ने को मिलीं. ऐसी ही कुछ श्रेष्ठ रचनायें आपकी सेवा में प्रस्तुत हैं. इनमे देशप्रेम भी है और अपनी कमियों की ओर ध्यान भी खींचा गया है तथा कुछ सुझाव भी देखने को मिलेंगे. हम सभी सम्बद्ध रचनाकारों / कवियों / शायरों का आभार व्यक्त करते हैं.


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जश्न-ए-आजादी के बाद...
अभी अभी उपजे दोहे।

साभार - पुष्पेन्द्र 'पुष्प'

बीत गये सत्तर बरस, हुए हमें स्वाधीन।
फिर भी 'जन' इस देश का, रहा दीन का दीन।

हरिया, गोपी, रामधन, जस के तस कंगाल।
लगी सदी इक्कीसवीं, मगर न बदला हाल।

बचपन कूड़ा बीनता, रहा गली में घूम।
आजादी का अर्थ भी, नहीं इन्हें मालूम।

कहाँ गई वह एकता, कहाँ गया सद्भाव।
दिए सियासत ने सदा, भारत माँ को घाव।

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बेशक, विदेशियों से हम आज़ाद हो गए
लेकिन कुरीतियों से अभी लड़ना है हमें


मुसारिफ़ हुसैन मंसूरी
सभी हिंदुस्तानियों को स्वतंत्रता दिवस की हार्दिक बधाई!
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स्वतंत्रता दिवस के अवसर पर
महात्मा गाँधी
साभार: निथिलेश कुमार घायल

मुल्क को आजादी की सौगात दे गया
गर्दन उठाकर जी सकें औक़ात दे गया

सत्य जिसकी ढाल थी तलवार अहिंसा
एटम बमों के वार को भी मात दे गया

झोपडे़ तक तर गये कदमों की धमक से
इंसान क्या पत्थर को भी जज्बात दे गया



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15 अगस्त की एक और कविता
इन्टरनेट से साभार: असलम चौहान

आबाद था आबाद है आबाद रहेगा
ये मुल्क तो आज़ाद है आज़ाद रहेगा
ऐ हिन्दू मुसलमां सुनों सिख और ईसाई
हमको जो लड़ायेगा वो बर्बाद रहेगा
हंसते हुए इस मुल्क पे जां जिसने गंवाई
उन वीर शहीदों का सिला याद रहेगा
हो जाए करम तेरा खुदा मुल्क पे मेरे
तो मुल्क में हर कोई यहां शाद रहेगा
है कितना हंसीं देखो तिरंगा ये हमारा
मांगी है दुआ रब से ये आबाद रहेगा



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