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Old 09-03-2017, 11:41 AM   #1
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Wink Tumse bichhadkar

Tumse bichhadkar ab ek pal bhi mai*na jee paaungi,
Sirf juda hone ka khayal dil ko*pagal bana jaata hai.

Saath hai*jeena saath hai marna or na kuchh chahungi,
Sirf tera hone ka ehesas hi*dil ko sukun de jaata hai.

Dekha hai ek dhundhla sa khwab jise pura karungi,
Sirf tera saath hi meri*har mushkil door kar jaata hai.

Beinteha muhobbat ko meri*aaj baya karke rahungi,
Sirf tera pyar zindagi ko meri rangin bana jaata hai.

Tumse bichhadkar ab ek pal bhi mai*na jee paaungi,
Sirf juda hone ka khayal dil ko*pagal bana jaata hai.

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Old 09-03-2017, 03:12 PM   #2
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tumse bichhadkar ab ek pal bhi mai*na jee paaungi,
sirf juda hone ka khayal dil ko*pagal bana jaata hai.

Saath hai*jeena saath hai marna or na kuchh chahungi,
sirf tera hone ka ehesas hi*dil ko sukun de jaata hai.

Dekha hai ek dhundhla sa khwab jise pura karungi,
sirf tera saath hi meri*har mushkil door kar jaata hai.

Beinteha muhobbat ko meri*aaj baya karke rahungi,
sirf tera pyar zindagi ko meri rangin bana jaata hai.

Tumse bichhadkar ab ek pal bhi mai*na jee paaungi,
sirf juda hone ka khayal dil ko*pagal bana jaata hai.

Shikha
बिछड़ने का डर कितना भयावह होता है ये आपकी इस रचना में सुन्दर तरीके से प्रस्तुत किया गया है
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bichhadkar ab ek pal bhi mai*na jee paaungi,
sirf juda hone ka khayal dil ko*pagal bana jaata hai.

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प्यार और मुहब्बत एक ऐसा अहसास है जो इंसान को इंसान से ही नहीं बल्कि ख़ुदा से भी मिला सकता है. सूफ़ी संतों की शायरी में इसी भाव की अनंत अभिव्यक्तियाँ मिल जाती हैं. बहुत सुंदर, शिखा जी. शेयर करने के लिये धन्यवाद.


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