02-04-2018, 03:08 AM | #1 |
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aie dost alvida
alvida aie dost teri dosti ko Bhulkar sare gile shikve aaj dur sabse dur jane ka waqt aa gaya Muaaf kar dena hame kisi hamaree gunah par Paye aapse behad khoobsurat pal hamne yadon me basakar unhe kabhi muskura liya karenge Shukriya dosto diya bahot sneh aapne hame Bhige the jis sneh sarita me ham labalab Kabhi hasna kabhi ruthana kabhi machalna to kabhi manana eise hasin pal mile aapse is nachiz ko . Nadan kitne the ham ki karte rahe paresha tumko. ye samjhkar ki pura hak banta hai mera tumpar. Chalo ye galtfahmi bhi aaj dur hui ab jii lenge unhi aapne purane aashiyane me ham to. Gar kabhi bhule se yad aa bhi jaye hamari Samjh lena gai balaa. Kismat se tumhaari. Aakhari muskurahat se lete hain sada ke liye bidai khush rahna apne aashiyane me yahi rahegi sada ye duva hamari |
02-04-2018, 10:29 AM | #2 | |
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Re: aie dost alvida
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बहुत दिनों बाद आपकी एक धीर-गंभीर रचना पढने को मिली. बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद, बहन पुष्पा जी.
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02-04-2018, 04:45 PM | #3 | |
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Re: aie dost alvida
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sabse pahle bahut dino bad aapni rachna yahan dene ke liye aapse or mere sabhi pathakon se muafi chahti hun bhai .. is kavita ke marm ko samjh kar uspar aapne aapni bahumulya pratikriya di iske liye aapka tahe dil se shukriya karti hun bhai .. |
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01-05-2018, 02:24 PM | #4 | |
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Re: aie dost alvida
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duniya ye chalti hai sirf pyar or vishwas ki badolat . chahe rishte koi bhi ho agar usme sachhai prem or vishwas ho to kabhi tutte.
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15-05-2018, 12:11 PM | #5 |
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SHIKHA JI BAHUT BAHUT AABHAR VYAKT KARTI HUN IS KAVITA PAR AAPNE JO LIKHA USKE LIYE insaani man kuchh bhi sochte rahta hai or usme se kuchh logo ki soch kabhi eisi bhi hoti hogi ye sochkar bas kavita likh dalithi . ji rishte to hamesha hi sneh ke sath adar samman sahit nibhane hote hain varna rishte to rah jate hain par unme jaan nahi rahti . thanks alott shikha ji for lovely comments .
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