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Old 23-01-2017, 12:26 AM   #1
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Kya kahen dost is nashe ki tabiyat kya hoti hai
Jab chadhe nasha kisi bhi chiz ka insa ki halat buri hoti hai

Veise to nashe ko kahete hain bura log ek jamane se

par ham kahte hain ki nashe ki adat bhi badi achhi ho sakti hai

Na maan lo ki nasha sirf sharab ka hota hai
jisme khone ke bad insa kuchh pal hasne ke bad sada rota hai


ek nasha tum bhi kar lo aie dost jo jivan ke safar ko khushiyon se bhar deta hai

Ye nasha hai ek insa ka duje insa se pyar ka jo ek baar lag gaya to kabhi na utarta hai

Is nashe me sirf gun hi gun hai aie dost
Kyunki ye rote ko hansi deta hai

ye nasha jab sir chadhkar b8lne lagta hai
tab insa khud ki vahsi fitarat ko sada ke liye hi kho deta hai

Sukun hai isame sharab ke nashe se bhi jyada
isme dubne vala or pilaane vala bhi bada khush hota hai

Kitani bhi karen tariff is pyar ke nashe ki ham

lagta hai aie dost kuchh to hai rah gaya kam .
Eise pyar ka nasha jahan me bas jaye tab na koi apna na koi bhi paraya hota hai

hai na ajeeb dosto ye ki is nashe me kisika nuksan nahi hota hai ..
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Old 23-01-2017, 06:10 AM   #2
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अति सुन्दर कविता। पहली बार सधी हुई सुन्दर पंक्तियाँ.. किन्तु इसका शीर्षक 'प्यार का नशा' होना चाहिए था।
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Old 23-01-2017, 04:55 PM   #3
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[[....ye nasha jab sir chadhkar bolne lagta hai
tab insa khud ki vahsi fitarat ko sada ke liye hi kho deta hai...]]

मनुष्य मनुष्य के बीच यदि सच्चे प्यार का विस्तार हो और वे एक दूसरे के लिये हर कुर्बानी देने के लिये सदा तैयार हों तो इससे बढ़ कर तन-मन व रूह को खुशी से भरने वाला और कोई नशा हो ही नहीं सकता. वह अपनी वहशी फ़ितरत को भी भूल जाता है जैसा कि आपने अपनी कविता के द्वारा और खास तौर पर उक्त पंक्तियों के ज़रिये समझाने का प्रयास किया है. इस रचना की प्रस्तुति के लिये आपका हार्दिक धन्यवाद, बहन पुष्पा जी.
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Old 24-01-2017, 12:42 PM   #4
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अति सुन्दर कविता। पहली बार सधी हुई सुन्दर पंक्तियाँ.. किन्तु इसका शीर्षक 'प्यार का नशा' होना चाहिए था।

इस रचना को पसंद करके उसपर टिपण्णी के लिए धन्यवाद रजत जी ..
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Old 24-01-2017, 12:48 PM   #5
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[[....ye nasha jab sir chadhkar bolne lagta hai
tab insa khud ki vahsi fitarat ko sada ke liye hi kho deta hai...]]

मनुष्य मनुष्य के बीच यदि सच्चे प्यार का विस्तार हो और वे एक दूसरे के लिये हर कुर्बानी देने के लिये सदा तैयार हों तो इससे बढ़ कर तन-मन व रूह को खुशी से भरने वाला और कोई नशा हो ही नहीं सकता. वह अपनी वहशी फ़ितरत को भी भूल जाता है जैसा कि आपने अपनी कविता के द्वारा और खास तौर पर उक्त पंक्तियों के ज़रिये समझाने का प्रयास किया है. इस रचना की प्रस्तुति के लिये आपका हार्दिक धन्यवाद, बहन पुष्पा जी.
सही कहा आपने की यदि एक मनुष्य दूजे से नफ़रत या बैर भाव छोड़कर सिर्फ प्यार से रहे तो स्वर्ग की सुन्दरता और शांति पृथ्वी पर ही विराजमान हो जाय . पर अफ़सोस भाई की कुछ लोग हैं जो सिवा बैर भाव के और नफ़रत के और कुछ अछि चीजों को अपने जहन में स्थान ही नहीं देते.तब तो आतंकी हमले , मेरा धर्म तेरा धर्म बस ये ही हो रहा है इस दुनिया में .

बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद भाई आपने यह कविता पसंद की .
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Old 27-01-2017, 10:58 PM   #6
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Sukun hai isame sharab ke nashe se bhi jyada
isme dubne vala or pilaane vala bhi bada khush hota hai

Kitani bhi karen tariff is pyar ke nashe ki ham

lagta hai aie dost kuchh to hai rah gaya kam .
बहुत अच्छी कविता, खास कर ये पंक्तियाँ.......
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Old 28-01-2017, 07:20 PM   #7
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[QUOTE=Pavitra;560273]बहुत अच्छी कविता, खास कर ये पंक्तियाँ.......:

हार्दिक आभार सह धन्यवाद पवित्रा जी ...
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Acha laga padh ke.. bohot umda....
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acha laga padh ke.. Bohot umda....
कविता को पसंद करने के लिए बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद राहुल जी ..
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