07-01-2013, 04:21 PM | #1 |
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God Creating Woman... in Garden of Eden
Then he felt something missing in land forbidden. After casting about for a suitable pearl, He kept messing around and created a girl. Two beautiful legs, so long and so slender, Round, slim, and firm, and ever so tender. Two lovely hips to increase his desire, And rounded and firm to bring out the fire. Two lovely breasts, so full and so proud, Commanding his eyes, as he whispers aloud. Two lovely arms, just aching to bless you, And two loving hands, to soothe and caress you. Soft, cascading hair hung down over her shoulder, And two dreamy eyes, just to make him grow bolder. 'Twas made for a man, just to make his heart sing. Then he added a mouth... ........... And Ruined the whole Beautiful thing.
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07-01-2013, 04:22 PM | #2 |
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Re: God Creating Woman... in Garden of Eden
God made a woman
with a lot of love And added in her Joy of heaven above And gave her strength To endure all pain And carry the burden Of life's loss and gain God gave her the gift Of joy and smile That she distributes To all in trial
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Re: God Creating Woman... in Garden of Eden
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दीपू जी, इन दोनों स्वर्गिक कविताओं में स्वर्ग से भी सुन्दर वातावरण का निर्माण किया गया है. पहली कविता में जहाँ नारी के माँसल सौन्दर्य का वर्णन पढ़ कर मुझे भर्तहरी के 'श्रृंगार शतक' का स्मरण हो आया जिसकी कुछ कविताओं का अंग्रेजी अनुवाद प्रीतीश नंदी द्वारा किया गया है. आपकी दूसरी कविता में नारी के अद्भुत गुणों का ज़िक्र है. पहली कविता की अंतिम पंक्ति मुझे खटक रही है .. And Ruined the whole Beautiful thing. दोनों कविताओं के लिए आपका शुक्रिया. |
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