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Old 15-06-2014, 11:40 PM   #481
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सरे-महफिल जुबाँ खुलवाने वालों।
जरा सोचो पशीमाँ कौन होगा?

पशीमाँ - लज्जित,
ग़ज़ल उसने छेड़ी मुझे साज़ देना
ज़रा उम्रे - रफ़्ता को आवाज़ देना

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ग़ज़ल उसने छेड़ी मुझे साज़ देना
ज़रा उम्रे - रफ़्ता को आवाज़ देना

नकाबे-रूख उलटने तक तो मुझको होश था लेकिन,
भरी महफिल में उसके बाद क्या गुजरी खुदा जाने........
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Old 16-06-2014, 12:11 PM   #483
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नकाबे-रूख उलटने तक तो मुझको होश था लेकिन,
भरी महफिल में उसके बाद क्या गुजरी खुदा जाने........
बहुत अच्छे, इस पर मुझे भी एक शे'र याद आ गया. प्रस्तुत है:

वो आये महफ़िल में इतना तो 'मीर' ने देखा
फिर उसके बाद चराग़ों में रोशनी न रही.

अब अन्ताक्षरी:

नये मंसूर हैं सदियों पुराने .... शैखो-क़ाजी हैं
न फ़तवे कुफ्र के बदले न उजरे-दार ही बदला


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Old 16-06-2014, 12:17 PM   #484
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बहुत अच्छे, इस पर मुझे भी एक शे'र याद आ गया. प्रस्तुत है:

वो आये महफ़िल में इतना तो 'मीर' ने देखा
फिर उसके बाद चराग़ों में रोशनी न रही.

अब अन्ताक्षरी:

नये मंसूर हैं सदियों पुराने .... शैखो-क़ाजी हैं
न फ़तवे कुफ्र के बदले न उजरे-दार ही बदला


लाख हुस्न हो क्या खुदनुमा जब कोई माइल ही न हो,
शम्अ को जलने से क्या मतलब जो महफिल न हो.......


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2.माइल - आकर्षित

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Old 16-06-2014, 09:42 PM   #485
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लाख हुस्न हो क्या खुदनुमा जब कोई माइल ही न हो,
शम्अ को जलने से क्या मतलब जो महफिल न हो.......

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2.माइल - आकर्षित

हमसे पूछो ग़ज़ल क्या है, ग़ज़ल का फ़न क्या है
चंद लफ़्ज़ों ही में जैसे कोई आग छुपा दी जाये
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हमसे पूछो ग़ज़ल क्या है, ग़ज़ल का फ़न क्या है
चंद लफ़्ज़ों ही में जैसे कोई आग छुपा दी जाये

ये किस ख़लिश ने फिर इस दिल में आशियाना किया,
फिर आज किस ने सुख़न हम से ग़ायेबाना किया.........


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Old 17-06-2014, 09:03 AM   #487
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- फैज़ अहमद फैज़

ये झुकी झुकी सी नज़रें ये उड़े उड़े से गेसू
तेरी सुब्ह कह रही है तेरी रात का फ़साना
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ये झुकी झुकी सी नज़रें ये उड़े उड़े से गेसू
तेरी सुब्ह कह रही है तेरी रात का फ़साना

न गुल अपना न खार अपना, न जालिम बागबाँ अपना,
बनाया आह किस गुलशन में हमने आशियाँ अपना.......
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नाना वापी कूप तड़ागा, सुमन वाटिका सुन्दर बागा.
जथा अनंत राम भगवाना, तथा कथा कीरति गुन गाना.




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