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Old 16-04-2012, 03:40 AM   #1
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मित्रो ! कल एक अंग्रेज़ी फोरम पर टहलते हुए चला गया ! एक सूत्र पर नज़र गई और मैं उसमें खो गया ! पूरे दो घंटे मैंने उस सूत्र पर बिताए और उस फोरम पर कुछ और देखे बिना चला आया, सिर्फ इसलिए कि वह सूत्र देखने के बाद कुछ और देखने की इच्छा ही शेष नहीं रही ! सूत्र की निर्माता थीं कोई देवी 'बसंती' ! ख़ास बात यह कि उस अंग्रेज़ी फोरम पर वह एकमात्र हिंदी सूत्र था ! बसंतीजी का शुक्रिया अदा करते हुए उस सूत्र की सामग्री मैं यहां आपको आनंदित करने के लिए प्रस्तुत कर रहा हूं ! उम्मीद है मेरी तरह ही आपको भी कविताओं का यह रूप बेहद लुभावना लगेगा ! धन्यवाद !
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O death! You’re like poetry
And I’ve been promised by a poem, that it shall be mine
As the pulse (of life) recedes, the pain & suffering go to (an eternal) sleep
And a yellowish (young) moon starts to rise and reach its zenith
The day is yet to sink in water, as the night waits, nigh, to the shore
It’s not dark, it’s not bright
it’s neither midnight nor high noon
And as the body loses material, the free soul gets seeped with (fresh) air
The poem has (fulfilled the) promise of being mine!
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Old 16-04-2012, 04:15 AM   #4
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Old 16-04-2012, 09:14 AM   #5
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अरे वाह ,कविता वो भी चित्रोँ के साथ ! मजा आ गया |
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अरे वाह, लेकिन मेरे लिए दु:ख बात है, क्योंकि यह मोबाइल से बहुत छोटा दिखता है।
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बेहतरीन । अलैक जी कविता का यह अंदाज बहुत ही प्यारा हैँ ।
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