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Old 09-11-2016, 07:57 AM   #1
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Smile किसी की चश्मे-तर में रहते हैं


वो तो अपने घर में रहते हैं
हम लेकिन भंवर में रहते हैं


अपना वजूद सबसे हसीं है
किसीकी चश्मे-तर में रहते हैं

(चश्मे-तर —- Wet eyes)

पोशीदा नहीं कुछ भी हमसे
मंज़र तमाम नज़र में रहते हैं

(पोशीदा —- Hidden, secret)

ज़माने लगेंगे मिलने में हमसे
हम नहीं जस्त भर में रहते हैं

(जस्त — Jump, bounce, फ़लांग)

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अभिनन्दन. अच्छी शुरुआत है.

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Shukriya ji!

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अभिनन्दन. अच्छी शुरुआत है.

shukriya ji! Wo link meri hi website ka hai agar aap link accept karte hain toh ye mere liye bhi achha rahega jo bhi interested viewers hain wo meri puri gazal pad sakte hain aur gareeb shayar ka bhi kaam chalta rahega
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