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Old 17-08-2016, 10:38 PM   #1
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ग़ज़ल
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एक अन्जान सफ़र पर निकला ।
मैं तेरी याद पहन कर निकला ।।

चोट खा खा के दुआएँ लैटीं ।
जिसको पूजा वही पत्थर निकला ।।

पी गया ख़ून पसीना मेरा ।
कितना कमज़र्फ़ समंदर निकला ।।

जब भी निकला वो अयादत को मेरी ।
ले के अल्फ़ाज़ के ख़न्जर निकला ।।

मैं तेरी दीद की हसरत ओढ़े ।
जिस्म की क़ैद से बाहर निकला ।।

मेरी मैय्यत को लगाया कांधा ।
ग़ैर था आप से बेहतर निकला ।।

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Old 18-08-2016, 12:02 PM   #2
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बहोत खुब! आशा है आपकी और रचनाएं हमें पढने को मिलेगी ।
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Old 18-08-2016, 06:06 PM   #3
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बहोत खुब! आशा है आपकी! और रचनाएं हमें पढने को मिलेगी ।
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Old 24-08-2016, 12:15 PM   #4
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ग़ज़ल
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एक अन्जान सफ़र पर निकला ।
मैं तेरी याद पहन कर निकला ।।
...
जब भी निकला वो अयादत को मेरी ।
ले के अल्फ़ाज़ के ख़न्जर निकला ।।

मैं तेरी दीद की हसरत ओढ़े ।
जिस्म की क़ैद से बाहर निकला ।।

मेरी मैय्यत को लगाया कांधा ।
ग़ैर था आप से बेहतर निकला ।।

---- हातिम जावेद
वाह...वाह... हातिम जावेद साहब. आपके दर्शन दुर्लभ हो गए. खैर, आप इस फोरम पर पुनः पधारे, यह आपके प्यार का ही प्रतीक माना जायेगा. आपने आते ही अपनी एक बेमिसाल ग़ज़ल प्रस्तुत की है जिसे पढ़ कर आनंद आया. बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद, मित्र.

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मैं तेरी दीद की हसरत ओढ़े ।
जिस्म की क़ैद से बाहर निकला ।।

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बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया मान्यवर Rajnsh manga जी एवं आकाश महेशपुरी जी !
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Jawed ji aap bahut hi umdaa likhte ho....maine bhi apni website pe naye poets k liye community banayi hai...aap chahein toh use kr sakte hain ose
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