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Old 09-10-2011, 11:09 PM   #1
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आईने की तरह से हर एक को खुश कर दिया ;
हुस्न है अखबार-सा,जो लिपि को समझा,पढ़ लिया .
दे नहीं पाये किसी सूरत धड़कता एक दिल ;
मेरे जिन सज़दों ने पत्थर को खुदा - सा कद दिया .
फ़िर नए का साथ पाने की जुगत भर है बसंत ;
पेड़ ने पतझड़ बता पत्ता ज़मीं पर ला दिया .
गेसुओं की छाँव तेरी रूठ कर जब से गयी ;
बर्फ की तकदीर जैसा मै पिघलता ही गया .
ऐ सितमगर बाद तेरे आँख में ठहरा न कोई ;
तेरे पहरेदार अश्कों ने अथक पहरा दिया .
पास थी तो चेहरा दिखता था तेरा चाँद - सा ;
दूर रहकर चाँद में चेहरा तेरा देखा किया .
क्या मुकद्दर , जिसने मेरी ज़िन्दगी बेडौल की ,
उम्र भर मैने उसे ग़ज़लों में ही ढाला किया .
जब हमारा दर्द तेरी आँख से बहने लगे ;
तब मै समझूंगा , मैने
नग्मा
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शब्दार्थ
~~( सितमगर = जुल्मी / अन्यायी )

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Old 10-10-2011, 07:17 AM   #2
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आईने की तरह से हर एक को खुश कर दिया ;
हुस्न है अखबार-सा,जो लिपि को समझा,पढ़ लिया .
दे नहीं पाये किसी सूरत धड़कता एक दिल ;
मेरे जिन सज़दों ने पत्थर को खुदा - सा कद दिया

फ़िर नए का साथ पाने की जुगत भर है बसंत ;
पेड़ ने पतझड़ बता पत्ता ज़मीं पर ला दिया .
गेसुओं की छाँव तेरी रूठ कर जब से गयी ;
बर्फ की तकदीर जैसा मै पिघलता ही गया .
ऐ सितमगर बाद तेरे आँख में ठहरा न कोई ;
तेरे पहरेदार अश्कों ने अथक पहरा दिया .
पास थी तो चेहरा दिखता था तेरा चाँद - सा ;
दूर रहकर चाँद में चेहरा तेरा देखा किया .
क्या मुकद्दर , जिसने मेरी ज़िन्दगी बेडौल की ,
उम्र भर मैने उसे ग़ज़लों में ही ढाला किया .
जब हमारा दर्द तेरी आँख से बहने लगे ;
तब मै समझूंगा , मैने
नग्मा कोई पूरा किया .

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आपकी ये लाईने मुझे बहुत ही खूबसूरत लगीँ ,
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Old 10-10-2011, 07:57 AM   #3
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क्या बात है राकेश जी.. एक ही दिन में दो दो उत्कृष्ट रचनाये. दिल बाग़ बाग़ हो गया..
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नमन जी ;
आपने पसंद किया ,
आपका शुक्रिया .
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जब हमारा दर्द तेरी आँख से बहने लगे ;
तब मै समझूंगा , मैने नग्मा कोई पूरा किया .

रचयिता ~~ डॉ. राकेश श्रीवास्तव
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जब हमारा दर्द तेरी आँख से बहने लगे

वाह! क्या बात है
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[size=4]दे नहीं पाये किसी सूरत धड़कता एक दिल ;
मेरे जिन सज़दों ने पत्थर को खुदा-सा कद दिया .
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गेसुओं की छाँव तेरी रूठ कर जब से गयी ;
बर्फ की तकदीर जैसा मै पिघलता ही गया .


dil ko chu gayee hai sar aapki ye kavita
nice poem , sunder ahsaas ke sath ddhanyavaad sr
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शुक्रिया डार्क सेंट अलैक जी एवं सोमवीर जी .
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