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Old 28-05-2017, 12:04 AM   #1
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हर एक लम्हा आये याद उस दिन का
जब आई मेरी नन्ही परी

सुन्दर नाजुक कोमल कोमल
मानो कोई खिली थी नन्ही सी कली

देख देख मैं मन ही मन खुश होती
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एक अनूठे आनंद से भर जाती
मैं ,और सहज मुस्कुराती मेरी अँखियाँ


मातृत्व का पद देकर तुमने ,
मुझको बेटी पूर्ण किया

अबोध ,निस्वार्थ निष्पाप सहजता बस
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Old 28-05-2017, 11:48 AM   #2
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हर एक लम्हा आये याद उस दिन का
जब आई मेरी नन्ही परी
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अपने प्यार को तूने
हम सब पर बरसा कर,
धन्य किया जीवन मेरा
श्रद्धा सुमन समर्पित कर
आज मनाएं जन्म दिन तेरा
माँ की आँखों में बसी उसकी बेटी की छवि कभी धूमिल नहीं हो सकती. उस समय तो और भी नहीं जब वह बेटी असमय ही काल ने छीन ली हो. अपनी प्यारी बेटी की याद में लिखी गयी यह कविता भाव-विव्हल कर देती है. जब माँ उसकी मधुर स्मृति को श्रद्धा सुमन अर्पित करती है तो ईश्वर भी भावुक हो जाता होगा. बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद, बहन पुष्पा जी.
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Old 01-06-2017, 12:04 AM   #3
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माँ की आँखों में बसी उसकी बेटी की छवि कभी धूमिल नहीं हो सकती. उस समय तो और भी नहीं जब वह बेटी असमय ही काल ने छीन ली हो. अपनी प्यारी बेटी की याद में लिखी गयी यह कविता भाव-विव्हल कर देती है. जब माँ उसकी मधुर स्मृति को श्रद्धा सुमन अर्पित करती है तो ईश्वर भी भावुक हो जाता होगा. बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद, बहन पुष्पा जी.
बहुत बहुत बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद भाई।

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Old 01-06-2017, 06:27 AM   #4
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हर एक लम्हा आये याद उस दिन का
जब आई मेरी नन्ही परी

सुन्दर नाजुक कोमल कोमल
मानो कोई खिली थी नन्ही सी कली

देख देख मैं मन ही मन खुश होती
लहराती मेरे मन की बगिया

एक अनूठे आनंद से भर जाती
मैं ,और सहज मुस्कुराती मेरी अँखियाँ


मातृत्व का पद देकर तुमने ,
मुझको बेटी पूर्ण किया

अबोध ,निस्वार्थ निष्पाप सहजता बस
इसका ही तुझमे मैंने दर्श किया।

अपने प्यार को तूने
हम सब पर बरसा कर,
धन्य किया जीवन मेरा
श्रद्धा सुमन समर्पित कर
आज मनाएं जन्म दिन तेरा
very very hearttouching poem pushpaji....betiya hoti hi aisi hai or fir beta ho ya beti, maa ke dil ka tukda hote hai vo. aapki beti jaha bhi hogi bahot khush hogi kyuki aapka pyar aaj bhi uske saath hai jo har pal use har dukho se door rakhega.
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Old 05-06-2017, 09:30 PM   #6
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very very hearttouching poem pushpaji....betiya hoti hi aisi hai or fir beta ho ya beti, maa ke dil ka tukda hote hai vo. aapki beti jaha bhi hogi bahot khush hogi kyuki aapka pyar aaj bhi uske saath hai jo har pal use har dukho se door rakhega.
ji shikha ji .. bahut abhut dhanywad
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हर एक लम्हा आये याद उस दिन का
जब आई मेरी नन्ही परी

सुन्दर नाजुक कोमल कोमल
मानो कोई खिली थी नन्ही सी कली

देख देख मैं मन ही मन खुश होती
लहराती मेरे मन की बगिया

एक अनूठे आनंद से भर जाती
मैं ,और सहज मुस्कुराती मेरी अँखियाँ


मातृत्व का पद देकर तुमने ,
मुझको बेटी पूर्ण किया

अबोध ,निस्वार्थ निष्पाप सहजता बस
इसका ही तुझमे मैंने दर्श किया।

अपने प्यार को तूने
हम सब पर बरसा कर,
धन्य किया जीवन मेरा
श्रद्धा सुमन समर्पित कर
आज मनाएं जन्म दिन तेरा
bahut khub.
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रवि सागर जी , प्रसंशात्मक टिपण्णी के लिए धन्यवाद
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सुंदर भावना से भरी रचना के लिए धन्यवाद !
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