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Old 30-12-2012, 09:49 AM   #1
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Default माफ़ कर मेरे खुदा तुझसे भरोसा उठ गया

मासूम सी एक कली को शैतान दरिंदों ने लूटा

माफ़ कर मेरे खुदा तुझसे भरोसा उठ गया !

माली ने सींचा था जिस बाग़ को अपने पसीने से

आकर अचानक से उसे हैवान परिंदा लूट गया !!

जिस भरोसे पर भेजते थे बेटियों को घर से बाहर

माफ़ कीजिये वो भरोसा भी आज पीछे छुट गया !!!

देखे थे सपने जिन्दगी के हरपल जागती आँखों से

भाग्य उसको क्यूं जाने उसका रूठ गया !!!!

सोमबीर ''नामदेव ''
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Old 30-12-2012, 10:01 AM   #2
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इतिहास के पन्ने पलट रहें हैं आजकल ,
देखें कहाँ - कहाँ पे क्यूँ सत्ता पलट गया ।

जिस देश में नारी की पूजा किये सभी ,
उस देश में नारी का रुतबा क्यूँ घट गया ।

कुदरत की बनाई हुई सबसे हंसीं मूरत ,
इंसान के हांथों में आया तो लुट गया ।

ताकत मिली उन्हें ,नुमाइश में लग गयें ,
ऐसे कली को रौंदा ,सरबस ही मिट गया ।

जो इस कदर बेदर्द है इन्सान न होगा ,
इंसानियत से अब तो भरोसा ही उठ गया ।
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दुआ करो कि सलामत रहे मेरी हिम्मत ! यह एक चिराग कई आंधियों पर भारी है !!
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Old 30-12-2012, 10:07 AM   #3
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जिस देश में नारी की पूजा किये सभी ,
उस देश में नारी का रुतबा क्यूँ घट गया ।

माफ़ कर मेरे खुदा तुझसे भरोसा उठ गया

bindu jain ji bahoot hi khoob surti ke sath

dard ko bayan kiya hai aapne dhanyavaad


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Old 30-12-2012, 05:31 PM   #4
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सोमबीर जी और बिंदु जी आप दोनों की ही रचनाएँ हृदयस्पर्शी है ..........
सच है जिस देश में नारी को पूजा जाता था आज उसी देश में नारी की दुर्दशा हो रही है !
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गजब की रचना है, हाल की घटनाओं की ऊपर।
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सोमबीर जी और बिंदु जी आप दोनों की ही रचनाएँ हृदयस्पर्शी है ..........
सच है जिस देश में नारी को पूजा जाता था आज उसी देश में नारी की दुर्दशा हो रही है !
malethiya jaapka bahut bahut dhanyavaad
aapse isi tarah se sahyog ki apeksha rhegi
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