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Old 13-10-2012, 02:59 PM   #1
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सिसक रही मानवता कैसे

देखो सड़क किनारे बैठ
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कल तक थी जो हृदय में
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घूर रहा उसे स्वार्थ
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हाय काल की विषमता....
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अद्भूत, प्रासंगिक और दिल को छु देने वाली रचना है।
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Old 13-10-2012, 03:37 PM   #3
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बहुत सुंदर रचना ,..........................
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[QUOTE=anilkriti;168415]
सिसक रही मानवता कैसे
देखो सड़क किनारे बैठ
आगे बढ़ जाते लोग
उसको वितृष्णा से देख


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