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Old 08-03-2014, 12:45 AM   #1
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Jhumta tu Kis dagar Aaj h chla
Kyon umeed ka suraj tjhe na dikh rha..
Mann ke hathon tu abhi majboor h
Pr vo khuda dekhta tera hr noor h...
KHUD PR AB TU YAKEEN KR...
CHL NIDAR , TU CHL NIDAR,TU CHL NIDAR..

Is jag mai tera mukh nhi chup payega
Harega tu jis jis dagar ab jaega...
Is vritti ko apni jeet mai tu badal
Khud ko shikhar pr laane ki hr chapal chl! Hr chal chl!..
GAM KI HR SANDOOK KO AB CHORKAR
CHL NIDAR, TU CHL NIDAR, TU CHL NIDAR...

Vo Jang ka medaan tere lie khila h
Peeche chor hr chaah ko Aaj tu bi khda h..
Sangharsh bhr nayno mai ab tu chl rha h
Tera dagar tere hi rang mai ab dhal rha h...
KHUD KO KHUSHI KI AUR AB NIHARKAR
CHL NIDAR, TU CHL NIDAR ,TU CHL NIDAR...
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Old 08-03-2014, 01:36 PM   #2
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jhumta tu kis dagar aaj h chla
kyon umeed ka suraj tjhe na dikh rha..
Mann ke hathon tu abhi majboor h
pr vo khuda dekhta tera hr noor h...
Khud pr ab tu yakeen kr...
Chl nidar , tu chl nidar,tu chl nidar..

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vo jang ka medaan tere lie khila h
peeche chor hr chaah ko aaj tu bi khda h..
Sangharsh bhr nayno mai ab tu chl rha h
tera dagar tere hi rang mai ab dhal rha h...
Khud ko khushi ki aur ab niharkar
chl nidar, tu chl nidar ,tu chl nidar..
बहुत सुन्दर .... बहुत सुन्दर, आपकी कविता में मुश्किलों का मुकाबला करने का हौंसला तथा विपरीत परिस्थितियों से टकराने का निश्चय अभिव्यक्त होता है. फोरम पर एक अच्छी कविता शेयर करने के लिये आपका धन्यवाद. कुछ पंक्तियाँ देवनागरी में लिखने का लोभ संवरण नहीं कर पाया:

झूमता तू किस डगर आज है चला

क्यों उम्मीद का सूरज तुझे न दिख रहा
मन के हाथों तू अभी मजबूर है
पर वो खुदा देखता तेरा हर नूर है
खुद पर अब तू यकीन कर
चल निडर, तू चल निडर, तू चल निडर.
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वो जंग का मैदान तेरे लिये खिला है
पीछे छोड़ हर चाह को आज तू भी खड़ा है
संघर्ष भर नयनो में अब तू चल रहा है
तेरा डगर तेरे ही रंग में अब ढल रहा है
खुद को खुशी की ओर अब निहार कर
चल निडर, तू चल निडर, तू चल निडर.
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