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Old 13-01-2015, 01:25 PM   #1
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Smile khavabo mein rahe

my new poem jo ab tk kahi bhi perkasit nahi hui

Mohabat ke lamhe ye sirf hamare khavabo mein rahe ,
Aashk ban ker arman hamari aankho mein rahe .
Na jane who kon sa pal judai le ker aay ,
Sukhe patte ki manid sada shakhaon mein rahe .
Dub ker dariya mein her pal sukhe hi rahe ,
Ret ke tile sada pyase barsato mein rahe .
Mile jab aandhre hum ko fir bhi khus rahe hum ,
Jugnu ban ker roz roshan hamesha raton mein rahe .
Ik bartan mein tel aur pani sa rahe per ,
Azb yah fasle sab mulakaton mein rahe .
Ab Koi rista baki nahi rah gaya tha “ anmol”
Na jane kyon tum sada mayri yadon mein rahe
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Old 13-01-2015, 02:09 PM   #2
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Behad mushkil plot par gadhi hui behad khoobsoorat kavita! Btw according to astrologers, kuch achche kaviyon ke my hindi forum men padharne ki sambhavana hai.
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Old 13-01-2015, 02:51 PM   #3
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Old 13-01-2015, 04:04 PM   #4
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Behad mushkil plot par gadhi hui behad khoobsoorat kavita! Btw according to astrologers, kuch achche kaviyon ke my hindi forum men padharne ki sambhavana hai.
tah dil se sukriya rajat ji
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Old 13-01-2015, 04:17 PM   #5
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my new poem jo ab tk kahi bhi perkasit nahi hui

mohabat ke lamhe ye sirf hamare khavabo mein rahe ,
aashk ban ker arman hamari aankho mein rahe .
Na jane who kon sa pal judai le ker aay ,
sukhe patte ki manid sada shakhaon mein rahe .
Dub ker dariya mein her pal sukhe hi rahe ,
ret ke tile sada pyase barsato mein rahe .
Mile jab aandhre hum ko fir bhi khus rahe hum ,
jugnu ban ker roz roshan hamesha raton mein rahe .
Ik bartan mein tel aur pani sa rahe per ,
azb yah fasle sab mulakaton mein rahe .
Ab koi rista baki nahi rah gaya tha “ anmol”
na jane kyon tum sada mayri yadon mein rahe
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Old 13-01-2015, 11:47 PM   #6
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Very very nice bhai
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