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Old 22-03-2017, 01:05 AM   #1
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Default purvaiya ki baten

neel gagan tale nihaaru mai samndar

man ki banchhe khil khil gain

dur gagan me panchhi sang ban pankhi

mai to udti chali gai


udati unche akash se dekhun dharti ko

mann hi mann ye sochte chali gai

azadi etani pyaari kyun kahlati

or man ko bhaati kyun hai


khule aakash ke bich khuli hawa me

na koi bandhan na koi krandan

bayar bahati thandi thandi si kanon me kuchh kahati si gai

dekh ye hai jahan mera yahan kabhi na mai dushit hui

teri dharti ne to mujhko bhi karke kala

mera bhi hai roop badal daala mai garm or bavali hui

idhar hai sundarta or svachhta jo hai sada se jivan mera


kude karkat ke dher lage hain

manvta ab dharti se gai

swarth sabhar sab sangi sathi tere

wahan nahi hai aapna koi

dekh jara is gagan path ko

mai or panchhi mil gungunate hain har koi

is nabh se meri sundrta se teri prithvi bhi nihaal hui

sun sun baten teri purvaiya main teri diwani ho gai

sach tu hi jivan manav ka tu hi sathi sangi

bin tere mar jate manav jaise meen(machhali) mare jal bin
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[....azadi etani pyaari kyun kahlati
or man ko bhaati kyun hai
na koi bandhan na koi krandan
manvta ab dharti se gai
wahan nahi hai aapna koi
....]
बहुत सुंदर भावाभिव्यक्ति. मानव व धरती के निरंतर विघटित होते जा रहे अंतर्संबंधों का काव्यात्मक चित्रण जो सोचने के लिये हमें मजबूर करता है. धन्यवाद, पुष्पा जी.
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[....azadi etani pyaari kyun kahlati
or man ko bhaati kyun hai
na koi bandhan na koi krandan
manvta ab dharti se gai
wahan nahi hai aapna koi
....]
बहुत सुंदर भावाभिव्यक्ति. मानव व धरती के निरंतर विघटित होते जा रहे अंतर्संबंधों का काव्यात्मक चित्रण जो सोचने के लिये हमें मजबूर करता है. धन्यवाद, पुष्पा जी.

बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद सह हार्दिक आभार भाई ,.. माफ़ी चाहती हूँ भाई आपके कमेंट पता नहीं कैसे देख न पाई

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