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Old 29-04-2012, 08:31 PM   #1
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रचना वास्तव में अच्छी लगे तभी कुछ कहें, झूठी प्रशंसा करने की कोई आवश्यकता नहीं है। इससे व्यर्थ ही पृष्ठ भर जाएगा।
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Old 29-04-2012, 09:00 PM   #2
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एक पुरानी फिल्म 'दाग' में किशोर कुमार का गाया एक गीत है- ''मेरे दिल में आज क्या है, तू कहे तो मैं बता दूँ''
इसी तर्ज पर मैंने दिनांक 30- अक्टूबर- 2010 को स्वयं गुनगुनाने के लिए एक रचना लिखी थी। प्रस्तुत है-
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इस जीभ को सिखा दे, बस राम नाम गाना।
ना-ये गीत ना गज़ल है, ना है कोई तराना।
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जिसको न आये सरगम , न राग का हो ज्ञानी-----2
उसके लिए भी है ये, आसान गुन-गुनाना।
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तर जायेगा रे बन्धु, संसार सिन्धु से तू --2
जिह्वा पे राम की ही, नईया को बस चलाना।
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खाने से जब भी फ़ुर्सत, ये जीभ तेरी पाये---2
तो राम नाम का भी, तू-स्वाद इसे चखाना।
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मन में जो पल रही है, कोई भी व्यर्थ बातें------2
रसना पे आने से ही, पहले उसे भूलाना।
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इस नाम के सहारे, कागज़ की नाव भी रे----2
कर देगी पार सागर, श्रद्धा से बैठ जाना।
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साहस नहीं है 'सौरभ', अग्नि में जो जला दे----2
भक्ति में रम के ख़ुद को, प्रह्लाद सा बनाना।

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Old 06-05-2012, 01:49 PM   #3
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आपकी कोशिश निश्चित ही सराहनीय है !
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क्योंकि दे तो एहसान और न दे तो शर्मिंदगी।
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Old 07-05-2012, 05:58 AM   #4
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आपकी कोशिश निश्चित ही सराहनीय है !
आपका धन्यवाद! पूरे सात दिन के बाद कोई प्रतिक्रिया आयी है।
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Old 07-05-2012, 06:03 AM   #5
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बहुत बढ़िया सौरभ भाई.
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बहुत बढ़िया सौरभ भाई.
धन्यवाद प्रशासक जी! आते रहिए।
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अब आगे कुछ और लिखेंगे तब आयेंगें ना
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Old 07-05-2012, 07:29 PM   #8
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अब आगे कुछ और लिखेंगे तब आयेंगें ना
देर से ही सही भला आ तो गयें। धन्यवाद!
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Dear Sri Shourabji,
Namaskaar !

Great composition. एक एक शब्*द सत्*य और सार्थक है
प्रभु के लिए लिखना , प्रभु के लिए गुनगुनना परम सौभाग्*य का फल होता है

I will love to have it on www.devotionalthoughts.in.
It is a free website , a non-advertisement based , non -profit making website containing thoughts that will lead one closer to ALMIGHTY GOD. Please go through it.
I am planning to develop a page of titled " UNSUNG LYRICS" (only devotional Lyric) which will showcase free UNSUNG BHAZAN LYRICS for anyone to pick up and make a melody out of it.
Yours can be the first post.
Contact me on the address given on website.
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GOD's sincerely
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