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Old 11-03-2016, 11:49 PM   #1
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परियों की शहजादी थी वो
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परियों की शहजादी थी वो
आसमान से आयी थी
मेरे घर पर खुशियों का वो
तोहफ़ा ले कर आयी थी

जब वो मेरे घर आयी तो
लगा तपस्या सफल हुयी
पर झोली में प्यार डाल कर
जीवन से ही निकल गयी

यही दिवस था बिटिया मेरी
लौट गई परियों के देस
आँसू के गुलदस्ते दे कर
लगा गई वो दिल को ठेस

कहते हैं मिलती है केवल
बेटी किस्मत वालों को
बेटी गयी तो सहलाएं क्या
अपने दिल के छालों को?


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Old 12-03-2016, 04:01 PM   #2
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परियों की शहजादी थी वो
आसमान से आयी थी
मेरे घर पर खुशियों का वो
तोहफ़ा ले कर आयी थी

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कहते हैं मिलती है केवल
बेटी किस्मत वालों को
बेटी गयी तो सहलाएं क्या
अपने दिल के छालों को?
श्रद्धांजलिस्वरुप यह एक भावभीनी एवम् मार्मिक कविता है. अल्पायु में ही बेटी को खो देने का दर्द माँ से अधिक और कौन जान सकता है. जीवन भर उसकी कमी का आभास होते रहना निश्चय माता पिता के लिये बहुत बड़ा आघात है. मुझे याद है कि पिछले वर्ष भी आपने इसी पृष्ठ भूमि में एक मार्मिक कविता पोस्ट की थी. हम सब आपके दुःख में शामिल हैं, बहन पुष्पा जी.

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Old 13-03-2016, 12:17 AM   #3
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[QUOTE=rajnish manga;557693][size=3]श्रद्धांजलिस्वरुप यह एक भावभीनी एवम् मार्मिक कविता है. अल्पायु में ही बेटी को खो देने का दर्द माँ से अधिक और कौन जान सकता है. जीवन भर उसकी कमी का आभास होते रहना निश्चय माता पिता के लिये बहुत बड़ा आघात है. मुझे याद है कि पिछले वर्ष भी आपने इसी पृष्ठ भूमि में एक मार्मिक कविता पोस्ट की थी. हम सब आपके दुःख में शामिल हैं, बहन पुष्पा जी.

जी हर पल यादें साथ रहतीं ही हैं पर जब वो दिन आता है तब मन का असहनीय दर्द शब्दों में अपने आप ढल जाता है भाई आप सबकी सहानुभूति के लिए आभारी हूँ .. आपने इस कविता को एडिट करके जो श्रधांजलि दी उसके लिए हार्दिक आभार सह धन्यवाद भाई
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Old 14-03-2016, 06:56 PM   #4
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bahot hi pyar or durd ke saath sajayi hai aapne apni ye creation.....par vo jaha bhi hogi aaj bhi pariyo ki shahejadi hi banke raheti hogi pushpaji...hum aapke durd ko bahot ache se mahesus kar sakte hai....hum aapke saath hai pushpaji....udas na ho aap kyuki ek beti kabhi bhi apni maa ko udas nahi dekh sakti...
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bahot hi pyar or durd ke saath sajayi hai aapne apni ye creation.....par vo jaha bhi hogi aaj bhi pariyo ki shahejadi hi banke raheti hogi pushpaji...hum aapke durd ko bahot ache se mahesus kar sakte hai....hum aapke saath hai pushpaji....udas na ho aap kyuki ek beti kabhi bhi apni maa ko udas nahi dekh sakti...


aapke pyar bhare shabdon ne mujhe bahut mansik shanti prdan ki hai shikha ji .. bahut abhari hun etane sare pyar sah sahkaar or sath dene ke liye shikhaji ...bahut bahut dhanywad ..
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Are aap hume aabhar vyakat karke sharminda kar rahe ho pushpaji....ye zindagi 4 din ki hai to kyu na apne har pal ko pyar se hi sincha jaaye or sabse pyar hi banta jaaye...insan hai hum jise pyar samaj aata hai ..pyar se to sare rishte sanwar jaate hai...itna power hota hai pyar mai par vo pyar nishwarth hona chahiye...or yahi sochte hai hum bas or kuch nahi...
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Are aap hume aabhar vyakat karke sharminda kar rahe ho pushpaji....ye zindagi 4 din ki hai to kyu na apne har pal ko pyar se hi sincha jaaye or sabse pyar hi banta jaaye...insan hai hum jise pyar samaj aata hai ..pyar se to sare rishte sanwar jaate hai...itna power hota hai pyar mai par vo pyar nishwarth hona chahiye...or yahi sochte hai hum bas or kuch nahi...
bahut pyare se suljhe vichar hai aapke shikha ji ...
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