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Old 25-05-2017, 10:47 AM   #1
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Kisi se roothne ki to baat he kanha thi,
Koi safar me saath aaya he nahi!

Nazren milne ki to baat he kanha thi,
Ushki baaton me mera zikra kabhi aaya he nahi!

Unse deedar ki to baat he kanha thi,
Chaand mere ghar kabhi aaya he nahi!

Baat khud se ho, yea baat he kanha thi,
sath ab apne apna saya he nahi!


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Baat khud se ho, yea baat he kanha thi,
sath ab apne apna saya he nahi!
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very very nice creation rahulji..
keep it up
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Baat khud se ho, yea baat he kanha thi,
sath ab apne apna saya he nahi!..

bahut khoob ... sundar rachna .. dhanywad rahul ji ..badhaiyan
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Kisi se roothne ki to baat he kanha thi,
Koi safar me saath aaya he nahi!

Nazren milne ki to baat he kanha thi,
Ushki baaton me mera zikra kabhi aaya he nahi!

Unse deedar ki to baat he kanha thi,
Chaand mere ghar kabhi aaya he nahi!

Baat khud se ho, yea baat he kanha thi,
sath ab apne apna saya he nahi!


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