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Old 07-12-2012, 09:35 PM   #11
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अहम
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अहम/ है कहाँ नहीं/
चाहे फिर वो
हो तेरा/ या/ मेरा हो ...
मिटता क्यों नहीं ...
ये अहम्

दीपक खत्री 'रौनक'

बहुत अच्छी रचना है दीपक खत्री जी, अंतर्मन की उथल पुथल और कशमकश की बड़ी स्वाभाविक अभिव्यक्ति रखी है आपने. सरल दिखने वाले प्रश्नों की सहज अनुभूति. धन्यवाद व बधाई. चंद पंक्तियाँ पेश कर रहा हूँ:-

मैं जानता हूँ तुम ग़लत नहीं हो
क्योंकि तुम जहाँ पर हो
वही ठीक था जो तुमने किया.
किन्तु में ग़लत हूँ
यह भी तो कहाँ सिद्ध हुआ है?
क्योंकि जहाँ में हूँ वहाँ पर
वही ठीक था जो मेने किया है.
दोनों अपनी अपनी जगह
ठीक हैं
दोनों अपनी अपनी जगह
बदल लें तो ???

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Old 12-12-2012, 10:46 AM   #12
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Bahut Bahut aabhaar rajneesh ji aapka............ aapki lekhni ki bhi jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai......... :-)
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Old 12-12-2012, 10:50 AM   #13
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दीपक जी आपकी रचनाये काफी अच्छी हैं, पढने में मज़ा आता है। ऐसे ही लिखते रहिये। धन्यवाद
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Old 13-12-2012, 08:33 PM   #14
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sukriya bhaijaan.....aabhaar aapka
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