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Old 13-11-2016, 10:04 PM   #1
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wah wah...kya baat kahe di aapne rajnishji....last two lines superb...
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शून्यता का वन कभी देखा नहीं
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दिल का अम्नो चैन भी जाता रहे
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जो हमारी मुश्किलों को काट दे
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आँख की बीनाई भी जाती रही
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बहुत बहुत बढिया....बहुत दिनों बाद फोरम पर आना हुआ ,और आपकी इस उत्कृष्ट रचना को पढ कर लगा कि आना सार्थक हुआ.......
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शुन्यता का एहसास अंतर्मन को झिंझोड़ जाता है इस भावना से ओतप्रोत सुन्दर रचना भाई ..
भाग्य किसी को इस सुन्यता का एहसास न करवाए ..
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बहुत बहुत बढिया....बहुत दिनों बाद फोरम पर आना हुआ ,और आपकी इस उत्कृष्ट रचना को पढ कर लगा कि आना सार्थक हुआ.......
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शुन्यता का एहसास अंतर्मन को झिंझोड़ जाता है इस भावना से ओतप्रोत सुन्दर रचना भाई ..
भाग्य किसी को इस सुन्यता का एहसास न करवाए ..

आप सभी की सुंदर समीक्षात्मक टिप्पणियों के लिये आभारी हूँ. शिखा जी, पवित्रा जी व बहन पुष्पा जी का बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद.


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