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Old 29-10-2010, 02:51 PM   #11
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आप हैं किन खयालो में
आपके बनियान में भी बेहोशी की शक्ति है
बहुत काम आएगा अस्पतालों में
हा हा हा..........
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Old 29-10-2010, 07:13 PM   #12
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आप हैं किन खयालो में
आपके बनियान में भी बेहोशी की शक्ति है
बहुत काम आएगा अस्पतालों में
बढ़िया तुकबंदी जोड़ी है

पर दादा मेहनतकश का बनियान हो या जुराब

मेहनत की खुशबू तो आएगी ही

अब अगर लोग इससे भी बेहोश होने लगे तो

खुदा खैर करे
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Old 29-10-2010, 08:34 PM   #13
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बढ़िया तुकबंदी जोड़ी है

पर दादा मेहनतकश का बनियान हो या जुराब

मेहनत की खुशबू तो आएगी ही

अब अगर लोग इससे भी बेहोश होने लगे तो

खुदा खैर करे
मैं एक बात जानता हूँ जो सत्य भी है
कि जो व्यक्ति खूब मेहनत करके पसीना बहाता है
उसके पसीने में बदबू नहीं होती

लेकिन यहाँ हसीं मजाक चल रहा है इसलिए मैंने कविता लिखी
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Old 29-10-2010, 08:49 PM   #14
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भाई जी , अनजाना जी , निशाँत भाई, तारा बाबू और सिकंदर भाई आप सभी का अभिनंदन है सूत्र मेँ । सर्वथा मृत तरंगोँ के कारण मैँ खिन्न हूँ । आपके होठोँ को आपके कानोँ तक खीचने का कार्य फिर कभी । धन्यवाद ।
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Old 29-10-2010, 08:53 PM   #15
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रिजल्ट साफ़ है
किसी भी चीज को ज्यादा खीचने से वो मृत हो जाती है
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Old 29-10-2010, 09:58 PM   #16
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यहाँ हसीं मजाक चल रहा है इसलिए मैंने कविता लिखी
तो मैंने कौन सा तोप छोड़ दिया
मैंने भी तो बस वही आगे बढाया जो आपने शुरू किया
आखिर बुजुर्गों की परम्परा बढ़ाना हमारा कर्त्तव्य जो ठहरा
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Old 30-10-2010, 10:15 AM   #17
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तो मैंने कौन सा तोप छोड़ दिया
मैंने भी तो बस वही आगे बढाया जो आपने शुरू किया
आखिर बुजुर्गों की परम्परा बढ़ाना हमारा कर्त्तव्य जो ठहरा
यदि इसी को आगे बढ़ाना है तो जल्दी से एक चुटीली कविता लिख मारो
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Old 30-10-2010, 12:09 PM   #18
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यदि इसी को आगे बढ़ाना है तो जल्दी से एक चुटीली कविता लिख मारो
जो हुक्म दादा
ये लो झेलो :-

कौन कहता है,

एक

म्यान में -

दो तलवारें नहीं होती!

शादी के बाद

वह दोनों तलवारें

एक ही -

मकान में तो होती है.
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करें क्या शिकायत अँधेरा नहीं है
अजब रौशनी है कि दिखता नहीं है

ये क्यों तुमने अपनी मशालें बुझा दीं
ये धोखा है कोई, सवेरा नहीं है

ये कैसी है बस्ती, ना दर, ना दरीचा
हवा के बिना दम घुटता नहीं है!

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क्या बात है क्या बात है लगे रहे भाई
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