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Old 13-11-2016, 08:32 PM   #1
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बदल जायेंगे दिन औ रात शायद
समझ लेते हैं वो तकलीफ़ मेरी
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संवर जायेंगे ये हालात शायद,..

उम्मीद के दामन को संभाले सुन्दर शब्दों से सजी प्रेरणा दायक रचना .

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उक्त कविता की प्रशंसा करने तथा मेरा उत्साहवर्धन करने के लिये शिखा जी, पवित्रा जी, पुष्पा सोनी जी तथा रफ़ीक जी का हार्दिक धन्यवाद.

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