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Old 29-09-2011, 10:55 PM   #11
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सर्वश्री n d hebar जी , सागर जी , रणवीर जी और

सुधीर जी को मेरे बहुत - बहुत धन्यवाद .
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Old 29-09-2011, 11:26 PM   #12
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कितनी संजीदगी से अपना पक्ष रख भेजा ;
मेरी किताब में इक मोर - पंख रख भेजा .
आँख अर्से से तरसती थीं
एक
मेहमां को ;
उसने इनके लिए ख़्वाबों का काफ़िला भेजा .
फिर से आकाश में बादल पे रंग चढ़ने लगे ;
धूप खिलने को है , सूरज ने दिलासा भेजा .
गुनगुने झोंकों ने फ़िर बर्फ़ पे हमला बोला ;
बसंत बन के फ़िर फूलों का सिलसिला भेजा .
बिख़र चुकी थी ज़िन्दगी वरक - वरक हो के ;
हमारे कल का बेहतरीन मसौदा भेजा .
आज कल आईना भी बावलापन करने लगा ;
निहारता हूँ जब , बस उसका ही चेहरा भेजा .
अब उसके साथ मिल , मुझको जो गुनगुनाना है ;
वो गीत लिखना मुझे , उसने बस मुखड़ा भेजा .


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Old 30-09-2011, 12:00 AM   #13
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भावना सिंह जी , आपका शुक्रिया .
आपको रचनाएं अच्छी लगती रहें ,
ऐसी कोशिश निरन्तर करता रहूँगा .
आशा है आपने पिछली सभी रचनाएं पढ़ी होंगी .
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भावना सिंह जी , आपका शुक्रिया .
आपको रचनाएं अच्छी लगती रहें ,
ऐसी कोशिश निरन्तर करता रहूँगा .
आशा है आपने पिछली सभी रचनाएं पढ़ी होंगी .
जी हाँ कुछ पढ़ी हैं कुछ बाकी हैं .......................
मै आशा करती हूँ की डॉक्टर साहब की दवाएं मरीजों को इसी प्रकार मिलती रहेंगी /
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