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Old 16-03-2016, 05:15 PM   #1
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Wink Mata pita ke aangan ko chhodkar





Aaj socha kuch naya likhte hai ..ek beti jab apne mata pita ka aangan chhodkar apne sasural jaati hai tab uski kya feelings hoti hai vahi likhne ki koshish kar rahe hai...


Mata pita ka aangan chhodkar aa rahi hu tere paas aaj,
Dil mai kuch durd bhi hai or tere liye asim pyar bhi hai.

Mere pyare khilone chhodkar aa rahi hu tere paas aaj,
Dil mai kuch durd bhi hai or tere sang kuch sapne bhi hai.

Mere mata pita ke ghar ko suna karke tera ghar sajane aa rahi hu tere paas aaj,
Dil mai kuch durd bhi hai or tere ghar ko khushiyo se sajane ki khwaish bhi hai.

Mere parivar ko chhodkar aa rahi hu tere paas aaj,
Dil mai bahot durd hai oe tere parivar ko apna banane ki khwaish bhi hai.

Mere parivar mai sabko chhodkar sirf tera hokar rahe jaungi aaj,
Mata pita ke aangan ko suna kar ke tere sang chal jaungi aaj.

Jis Bhai bahen ke saath bachapan bita unhe akele chhod chali aaungi aaj,
Sabke dil mai ye judai ke durd ko basakar chali aaungi aaj.

Behad pyar hai muje apne parivar ke sabhi sadsyo se,
Par sirf or sirf tere liye sabko chhodkar chali aaungi tere paas aaj.

Ek wada karle mujse ki kabhi bhi bhulkar bhi muje na bhula dena,
Varna is duniya ki bhid mai mai tutkar bikhar jaungi.

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Old 16-03-2016, 09:54 PM   #2
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"Mere mata pita ke ghar ko suna karke tera ghar sajane aa rahi hu tere paas aaj,
Dil mai kuch durd bhi hai or tere ghar ko khushiyo se sajane ki khwaish bhi hai."
विवाह के उपरान्त अपने माता-पिता, भाई बहन, गुड्डे गुड़ियाँ सब छोड़ कर दुल्हन जब अपने पति के घर आती है तो उसके मन की जो स्थिति होती है, उसका बहुत सुंदर वर्णन इस कविता में किया गया है. धन्यवाद, शिखा जी.

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Old 17-03-2016, 06:52 PM   #3
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Bahot bahot shukriya rajnishji....humari creation mai chhupi feelings ko samjne ke liye
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अपनों से दुरी और परायो को अपनाने की ख़ुशी और ग़म को खूबसूरती से आपने शब्दों में पिरोया है शिखा जी, जो काबिले तारीफ है ही साथ ही एक अटल विश्वास जीवन साथी पर भरपूर विश्वास के एहसास को आपने बहुत सुन्दरता से बयां किया है यहाँ ... अनेकानेक बधाइयाँ
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Thank you so much pushpaji
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