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Old 30-07-2014, 03:37 PM   #1
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राखी है नाम भाई का बहनों को बचाना
राखी है नाम मर्द का औरत को बचाना
राखी है नाम अजनबी को बहन बनाना
फिर बहन की रक्षा में जी जान लगाना
पर यहाँ तो दस्तूर हैं हैवानों के जारी
खुद अपने ही होते हैं कई बार शिकारी
हर एक की जुबां पे हैं माँ बहन की गाली
हर एक जबां गंदी है हर आँख है काली
हे भाई तू सब बहनों की रक्षा सदा करना
दुशासनों की दुनिया में श्रीकृष्ण तुम बनना
हर द्रौपदी के सर पे अपना हाथ बढ़ाना
मानवता क्या होती है ये दुनिया को दिखाना
इतना था कहना उसका कि वो मंद हो गई
इस भाई के हाथों में वो विलीन हो गयी
दुनिया के सफर को यहीं पे खत्म कर चली
भगवान की गोदी में कहीं दूर हो चली…
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Old 30-07-2014, 04:06 PM   #2
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Old 31-07-2014, 10:18 AM   #3
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Old 01-08-2014, 04:58 PM   #5
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राखी पर कविता - मेरी दुआओं की राखी भैया के नाम ....


मेरी दुआओं की राखी भैया के नाम ....
कुछ दुआओं की रोली ,खुशिओं के चावल
प्यार के मोतिओं से पिरोकर एक डोरी
मैंने भेजी है भैया तेरे नाम की ...
कुछ ज़ज्बात हमारे इस बंधन के
कुछ यादें हमारे उस बचपन की
मैंने भेजी हैं भैया तेरे नाम की
आज परदेस बैठी तेरी बहन तेरी राह देखा करती है
तुम्हारे बचपन के पल याद कर बस मुस्कुरा दिया करती हैं
फिर आँखों से लगा ,चूमकर राखी तुम्हे भेज दिया करती हैं
जानती ही तुम हो अपनी दुनिया में मस्त
हम बहने भी हैं अपनी छोटी से बगिया में व्यस्त
बंद लिफाफे में समेट कर प्यार भेज दिया करती है
क्या हुआ जो हमसे दूर हो ,पर हमारी आँखों का नूर हो
तुम जिओ हजारो साल ,पाओ ज़िन्दगी में हर मुकाम
ये दुआ है इस बहना की तुम मुस्कुराओ सुबह शाम
बचपन में जैसे राखी बंधवाने को इतराते थे
भाग के माँ के आँचल में छुप जाया करते थे
मन्नतों से जो तुम्हे पाया था ,सर आँखों पे तुम्हे बिठाया था
इसलिए हर नाज़ हम बहनों ने तम्हारा उठाया था
आज भी भैया तुम बेशक इतरा लेना
पर राखी हमारी अपनी कलाई पे बाँध लेना
राखी अपनी कलाई पे बांध लेना ........


तुम्हारी बहना ...
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Old 05-08-2014, 03:37 PM   #6
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etani sundar kavita padhakr aankhe bhar aain or aapne aapko na rok saki kuchh likhne se ... behad khoobsurati se aarthpurna bat kahi hai aapne rafiq bhai, jo ki aaj ke samay ki behad jaruri mang hai.... bahan betiyon ki surksha ko lekar jabki sara samaaj chintit hai. shayd kisi ek dil ko aapki ye kavita chhu jay or koi ek bure vichar rakhne wala insan sudhar jay to kai bahan beti ki raksha aapne aap ho jayegi aaj eise sahitya ki behad jarurat hai hamare samaj ko .... thanksss for shairing with us .... sorry mene fir se english me apne comments diye hain jinhe pasand na aay hon we bhai bahan mujhe muaf karen ...
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etani sundar kavita padhakr aankhe bhar aain or aapne aapko na rok saki kuchh likhne se ... behad khoobsurati se aarthpurna bat kahi hai aapne rafiq bhai, jo ki aaj ke samay ki behad jaruri mang hai.... bahan betiyon ki surksha ko lekar jabki sara samaaj chintit hai. shayd kisi ek dil ko aapki ye kavita chhu jay or koi ek bure vichar rakhne wala insan sudhar jay to kai bahan beti ki raksha aapne aap ho jayegi aaj eise sahitya ki behad jarurat hai hamare samaj ko .... thanksss for shairing with us .... sorry mene fir se english me apne comments diye hain jinhe pasand na aay hon we bhai bahan mujhe muaf karen ...
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Old 03-09-2014, 06:03 PM   #8
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हौेसले बुलंद कर ,रास्तों पर चल दे ,तुझे तेरा मुकाम मिल जायेगा !

अकेला तू पहल कर काफिला खुद बन जायेगा !
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