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Old 16-10-2014, 03:50 PM   #1
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Default आराम । ( गज़लनुमा गीत ) aaram-gazalmuma geet.

आराम । ( गज़लनुमा गीत )
AARAM-GAZALMUMA GEET.

चल ज़िंदगी,तुझ को नया इक नाम दें ।
Chal zindagi tuz ko naya ek nam de.
इस रूह को अब जरा आराम दें ।
Es ruh ko jara aaram de.

१.
रितुओं की तरह, आते - जाते रहे..!
Rituo ki tarah aate-jaate rahe.
उन ज़ख़मों को, अहम इनाम दें ।
Un zakhmo ko enaam de.
चल ज़िंदगी,तुझ को नया इक नाम दें ।

२.
तुझ से बिछड़ना ? ग़म तो है, मगर..!
Tuz se bichhadana Gam to hai par.
चंद पल हमें, तनहा, गुमनाम दें ।
Cand pal hame tanaha gumnaam de.
चल ज़िंदगी,तुझ को नया इक नाम दें ।

३.
इस भीड़ में, मिले न कभी, हम से हम..!
Es bhid me mile na kabhi ham se ham.
ऐसे रिश्ते को सरपट अन्जाम दें ।
Aise riste ko sarapat anjam de.
चल ज़िंदगी,तुझ को नया इक नाम दें ।
सरपट = तेज़,

४.
रुकती ये धड़कन, थमती ये सांसें..!
Rukati ye dhadakan,thamati ye sansen.
इस जश्*न को, अनवर कलाम दें ।
Es jashn ko anavar kalaam de.
चल ज़िंदगी, तुझ को नया इक नाम दें ।
अनवर = श्रेष्ठ, कलाम = जुमला,

मार्कण्ड दवे । दि नां क - १५-१०-२०१४.
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