04-09-2018, 05:41 PM | #1 |
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Kaise Vo apna ban baithe - shikha
Kaise ruh mai bas gaye the pata hi nahi chala tha. Raat ko sapno mai hum unhe hi to dekha karte the, Kaise vo mujse door ho gaya pata hi nahi chala tha. Ek hum the jo baar baar ishq e izhar kiya karte the, Kaise vo inse anjaan bana raha pata hi nahi chala tha. Na jaane dil mai kitne raaz liye huye firte rahete the, Kaise vo mera masiha ban gaya pata hi nahi chala tha. Kaise vo durd ko dil mai chhipaye hanste rahete the , Kaise Shikha ki muskan ban gaya pata hi nahi chala tha. Shikha
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07-09-2018, 04:20 PM | #2 |
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Re: Kaise Vo apna ban baithe - shikha
बहुत सुंदर कविता तथा श्रेष्ठ भावाभिव्यक्ति. कृपया ध्यान दें कि इश्क़-ए-इज़हार के स्थान पर इज़हार-ए-इश्क़ (या इश्क़ का इज़हार) होना चाहिये.
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Re: Kaise Vo apna ban baithe - shikha
Quote:
Ya , aage se khayal rakhenge. Thanks Hume humari galti batane ke liye
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