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Old 25-09-2014, 11:02 PM   #1
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कोई भी राज़ तेरा ये समझ पाया नहीं है

ग़ज़लकार: श्री सुरेन्द्र चतुर्वेदी
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कोई भी राज़ तेरा ये समझ पाया नहीं है
हज़ारों जिस्म हैं तेरे कोई साया नहीं है I

No one has realized your true form somehow,
‘Cause you have myriad forms sans a shadow.

अगर चाहे तो आकर तू मुझे आबाद कर दे
मेरी तन्हाइयो का कोई सरमाया नहीं है I

If you please upon me anything ye may bestow,
I thrive on my solitude sans any wealth to show.

नहीं दर पे सिवा तेरे किसी के मैं गया हूँ
सिवा तेरे कोई भी घर मेरे आया नहीं है I

Nobody’s but thou threshold have I approached,
And nobody but thou hath visited me until now.

लिखे हैं आंसुओं ने ही मेरे अहसास लेकिन
मेरी खामोशियों को दर्द ने गाया नहीं है I

All my sentiments have been expressed by tears,
But muteness of mine remains a weeping willow.

ये सच है इश्क तेरा है सफ़र बस बेखुदी का
गया है जो कभी वो लौट कर आया नहीं है I

True that your love is a journey into selflessness,
One who has departed will no more return now.

सभी को वक्त ही देता रहा धोके हमेशा
कभी धोखा किसी से वक़्त ने खाया नहीं है I

The time has invariably betrayed one and all,
Has it ever been the other-way-round-show?
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Old 26-09-2014, 11:44 PM   #2
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अजी वो राज ही क्या जो समझ आ जाये।
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अजी वो राज ही क्या जो समझ आ जाये।


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ग़ज़ल
कोई भी राज़ तेरा ये समझ पाया नहीं है

ग़ज़लकार: श्री सुरेन्द्र चतुर्वेदी
अंग्रेजी रूपांतर: रजनीश मंगा

कोई भी राज़ तेरा ये समझ पाया नहीं है
हज़ारों जिस्म हैं तेरे कोई साया नहीं है i

no one has realized your true form somehow,
‘cause you have myriad forms sans a shadow.

अगर चाहे तो आकर तू मुझे आबाद कर दे
मेरी तन्हाइयो का कोई सरमाया नहीं है i

if you please upon me anything ye may bestow,
i thrive on my solitude sans any wealth to show.

नहीं दर पे सिवा तेरे किसी के मैं गया हूँ
सिवा तेरे कोई भी घर मेरे आया नहीं है i

nobody’s but thou threshold have i approached,
and nobody but thou hath visited me until now.

लिखे हैं आंसुओं ने ही मेरे अहसास लेकिन
मेरी खामोशियों को दर्द ने गाया नहीं है i

all my sentiments have been expressed by tears,
but muteness of mine remains a weeping willow.

ये सच है इश्क तेरा है सफ़र बस बेखुदी का
गया है जो कभी वो लौट कर आया नहीं है i

true that your love is a journey into selflessness,
one who has departed will no more return now.

सभी को वक्त ही देता रहा धोके हमेशा
कभी धोखा किसी से वक़्त ने खाया नहीं है i

the time has invariably betrayed one and all,
has it ever been the other-way-round-show?
अनुवाद के साथ एक अच्छी प्रस्तुति के लिए धन्यवाद.
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"कोई भी राज तेरा समझ पाया नही" बहूत अच्छी अभ्व्यक्ति सुन्दर रचना .... थैंक्स रजनीश जी हमरे साथ शेयर करने के लिए ...
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"कोई भी राज तेरा समझ पाया नही" बहूत अच्छी अभ्व्यक्ति सुन्दर रचना .... थैंक्स रजनीश जी हमरे साथ शेयर करने के लिए ...
आपकी उत्साहवर्धक टिप्पणी के लिए आभार व्यक्त करता हूँ, सोनी जी.
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