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Old 08-03-2015, 10:46 PM   #1071
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किताबों में मेरे फ़साने ढूँढ़ते है,
नादान हैं गुज़रे ज़माने ढूँढ़ते है.
जब वोह थे....!! तलाश-इ-ज़िन्दगी भी थी,
अब तो मौत के ठिकाने ढूँढ़ते है
हमें ज़माना हुआ सर पे ख़ाक डाले हुए
ख़ुशी तो होगी अगर दश्त के हवाले हुए
कोई भी वस्ल की उम्मीद से बहलता नहीं
सयाने हो गए सब रोग दिल के पाले हुए

दश्त = बियाबान / वस्ल = मिलन
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Old 09-03-2015, 02:46 PM   #1072
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हमें ज़माना हुआ सर पे ख़ाक डाले हुए
ख़ुशी तो होगी अगर दश्त के हवाले हुए
कोई भी वस्ल की उम्मीद से बहलता नहीं
सयाने हो गए सब रोग दिल के पाले हुए

दश्त = बियाबान / वस्ल = मिलन
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एक नया मोड़ देते हुए फिर फ़साना बदल दीजिये
या तो खुद ही बदल जाइए या ज़माना बदल दीजिये

!मंजर भोपाली !
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Old 13-03-2015, 11:28 AM   #1073
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एक नया मोड़ देते हुए फिर फ़साना बदल दीजिये
या तो खुद ही बदल जाइए या ज़माना बदल दीजिये

!मंजर भोपाली !

ये धूप जो धोके से चली आई है इसको
दोबारा मिरे घर में दिखाई नहीं देना

तै है कि सजा हमको भुगतनी है बहरहाल
अबके भी हमें कोई सफ़ाई नहीं देना
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Old 13-03-2015, 07:10 PM   #1074
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ये धूप जो धोके से चली आई है इसको
दोबारा मिरे घर में दिखाई नहीं देना

तै है कि सजा हमको भुगतनी है बहरहाल
अबके भी हमें कोई सफ़ाई नहीं देना
(मुज़फ्फ़र हनफ़ी)


नज़्म उलझी हुई है सीने में
मिसरे अटके हुए हैं होठों पर
उड़ते फिरते हैं तितलियों कि तरह
लफ्ज़ कागज़ पे बैठे ही नहीं
कब से बैठा हूँ मैं जानम
सादे कागज़ पे लिख के नाम तेरा

बस तेरा नाम ही मुकम्मल है
इस से बेहतर भी नज़्म क्या होगी
----- गुलज़ार




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Old 13-03-2015, 11:02 PM   #1075
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नज़्म उलझी हुई है सीने में
मिसरे अटके हुए हैं होठों पर
उड़ते फिरते हैं तितलियों कि तरह
लफ्ज़ कागज़ पे बैठे ही नहीं
कब से बैठा हूँ मैं जानम
सादे कागज़ पे लिख के नाम तेरा

बस तेरा नाम ही मुकम्मल है
इस से बेहतर भी नज़्म क्या होगी
----- गुलज़ार


ग़म का सलीका पैदा कर
आँसू आँसू दरिया कर
आँखें पथरा जायेंगी
इतने ख़्वाब न देखा कर
(तारिक़ क़मर 'तारिक़')

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Old 14-03-2015, 04:06 PM   #1076
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ग़म का सलीका पैदा कर
आँसू आँसू दरिया कर
आँखें पथरा जायेंगी
इतने ख़्वाब न देखा कर
(तारिक़ क़मर 'तारिक़')

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इस बहकती हुई दुनिया को संभालो यारों
कैसे आकाश में सूराख नहीं हो सकता
एक पत्थर तो तबियत से उछालो यारों !!
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Old 14-03-2015, 07:45 PM   #1077
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रहनुमाओं की अदाओं पे फ़िदा है दुनिया
इस बहकती हुई दुनिया को संभालो यारों
कैसे आकाश में सूराख नहीं हो सकता
एक पत्थर तो तबियत से उछालो यारों !!
रोटी न पेट में हो तो फिर कुछ जतन न हो
मेले की सैर ख्वाहिश-ए-बाग़-ए-चमन न हो
भूके ग़रीब दिल की खुदा से लगन न हो
सच ही कहा किसी ने भूके भजन न हो

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रोटी न पेट में हो तो फिर कुछ जतन न हो
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भूके ग़रीब दिल की खुदा से लगन न हो
सच ही कहा किसी ने भूके भजन न हो

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रात के पेड़ पे कल ही देखा था चाँद
बस पक के गिरने ही वाला था

सूरज आया था, ज़रा उसकी तलाशी लेना

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बस पक के गिरने ही वाला था

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