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Old 07-02-2017, 10:38 AM   #1
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Bikhar rahi thi unki zindagi,
Wo kehna chahte they yea baat, mujhe pata tha..!

Her jeet wo apni mere naam kar rahe the,
Wo mante the ishme apni haar, mujhe pata tha..!

Wo sath they to safar kitna aasan tha,
bohot mushkil hoga yea safar bin unke, mujhe pata tha..!

Ab wo nahi hain to bikhar rahi hai meri zindagi,
Aur keh na paunga main unse yea baat... Shayad unhe pata tha...!!
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खुबसूरत रचना हमसे शेयर करने के लिए धन्यवाद सह बधाइयाँ
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आप की सोच में तथा अभिव्यक्ति में झील सी गहराई है तथा गंभीरता है. संबंधों की कोमलता तथा उनके उतार-चढ़ाव से हो कर गुज़रने का अनुभव आपने बड़ी संवेदनशीलता के साथ अपने शब्दों में ढाला है. बधाई व धन्यवाद, राहुल जी.


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