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Old 11-04-2016, 04:42 PM   #1
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Ek aisi ladki ki dastan hai jisne har mushkil ka dantkar samna kiya or sabke dilo mai apni khas jagah bhi banayi..



Masum si bholi si vo pyare se gulshan ki kali thi,
Pyar ke siva sikha usne kuch bhi nahi.
Rishto ko kaise sambhala jaaye usse vo anjan thi,
Ek din achanak kisi ajnabi ke sang chal di thi.

Nayi raah pe use apne kadam ko sambhalkar chalna tha,
Saath uske koi nahi sirf uska haunsla tha,
Mata Pita ne diye sansakaro ko use dipana tha,
Bhai bahen ke pyar ko sabke dilo mai roshan karna tha.

Raste pe uske har mod pe kai mushkile aati gayi,
Na jisne kabhi aansu bahaye uski aankho se aansu ki dhar baheti gayi.
Khud hi royi, tutkar bikhar gayi or khud hi khud ko sametti rahi,
Ek nayi subah ki aash mai nayi suraj ki roshni mai hansti gayi.

Aakhir vo din bhi aa hi gaya jab vo kisike dil ki dhadkan ban gayi,
Apne ghar mai sabke dilo mai usne apni khas jagah bhi banayi,
Zindagi ko bahot karib se jeeya or use parkha bhi,
Uske chahere ki sirf ek hansi sare chahere ki muskan ban gayi.

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Old 17-04-2016, 08:31 AM   #2
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[QUOTE=Shikha sanghvi;558004]Ek aisi ladki ki dastan hai jisne har mushkil ka dantkar samna kiya or sabke dilo mai apni khas jagah bhi banayi..



Masum si bholi si vo pyare se gulshan ki kali thi,
Pyar ke siva sikha usne kuch bhi nahi.
Rishto ko kaise sambhala jaaye usse vo anjan thi,
Ek din achanak kisi ajnabi ke sang chal di thi.

Nayi raah pe use apne kadam ko sambhalkar chalna tha,
Saath uske koi nahi sirf uska haunsla tha,
Mata Pita ne diye sansakaro ko use dipana tha,
Bhai bahen ke pyar ko sabke dilo mai roshan karna tha.

Raste pe uske har mod pe kai mushkile aati gayi,
Na jisne kabhi aansu bahaye uski aankho se aansu ki dhar baheti gayi.
Khud hi royi, tutkar bikhar gayi or khud hi khud ko sametti rahi,
Ek nayi subah ki aash mai nayi suraj ki roshni mai hansti gayi.

Aakhir vo din bhi aa hi gaya jab vo kisike dil ki dhadkan ban gayi,
Apne ghar mai sabke dilo mai usne apni khas jagah bhi banayi,
Zindagi ko bahot karib se jeeya or use parkha bhi,
Uske chahere ki sirf ek hansi sare chahere ki muskan ban gayi.



shikha ji ek sidhi sadi ladki ke jivan sangharsh ko aapne bakhubi bayan kiya hai .. uske sapne uska tutna or jivan ke sath himmat se aage badhate kadam dusron ke ke liye ek udaharan ban jate hain .. khoob surat rachna hai aapki ...bahut khoob .........
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जीवन की कशमकश, मुश्किलों और उतार चढ़ाव को न सिर्फ़ आपने महसूस किया बल्कि उनके बीच से आपने प्यार की एक नहर भी निकाल ली. सकारात्मक सोच व कर्म से सारी कायनात को अपना बनाया जा सकता है. बहुत सुंदर.

Thank you so much rajnishji...Hume khushi hai ki hum jo is rachna ke zariye samjana chahte hai vo aap sab Bahot achhe se samaj jaate ho. Bilkul sahi kaha Aapne ki jivan ki anginat mushkilo Mai bhi usne apne pyar se sabko jeet liya...
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Ek aisi ladki ki dastan hai jisne har mushkil ka dantkar samna kiya or sabke dilo mai apni khas jagah bhi banayi..



Masum si bholi si vo pyare se gulshan ki kali thi,
Pyar ke siva sikha usne kuch bhi nahi.
Rishto ko kaise sambhala jaaye usse vo anjan thi,
Ek din achanak kisi ajnabi ke sang chal di thi.

Nayi raah pe use apne kadam ko sambhalkar chalna tha,
Saath uske koi nahi sirf uska haunsla tha,
Mata Pita ne diye sansakaro ko use dipana tha,
Bhai bahen ke pyar ko sabke dilo mai roshan karna tha.

Raste pe uske har mod pe kai mushkile aati gayi,
Na jisne kabhi aansu bahaye uski aankho se aansu ki dhar baheti gayi.
Khud hi royi, tutkar bikhar gayi or khud hi khud ko sametti rahi,
Ek nayi subah ki aash mai nayi suraj ki roshni mai hansti gayi.

Aakhir vo din bhi aa hi gaya jab vo kisike dil ki dhadkan ban gayi,
Apne ghar mai sabke dilo mai usne apni khas jagah bhi banayi,
Zindagi ko bahot karib se jeeya or use parkha bhi,
Uske chahere ki sirf ek hansi sare chahere ki muskan ban gayi.



shikha ji ek sidhi sadi ladki ke jivan sangharsh ko aapne bakhubi bayan kiya hai .. uske sapne uska tutna or jivan ke sath himmat se aage badhate kadam dusron ke ke liye ek udaharan ban jate hain .. khoob surat rachna hai aapki ...bahut khoob .........
Thank you so much pushpaji.....bilkul sahi kaha Aapne ki ye rachna un logo ke liye bhi mishal ban sakti hai jo Apni zindagi se Bahot pareshan rahete ho...zindagi Mai utar chadhav to aate hai par Hume apne pyar se har tufan ka samna karna chahiye.....
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