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08-01-2013, 10:59 AM | #1 |
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Kuch Likhna Chahata Hoon
Kuch Likhna Chahata Hoon Sochta Hoon Kya Likhoon ? Pholoon Ki Woh Mehakti Khushboo Barish Ka Woh Bhega Pani Aur Hawa Mein Thi Jo Rawani Kya Uss Mousam Ka Khumaar Likhoon? Kuch Likhna Chahata Hoon Sochta Hoon Kya Likhoon? Thi Chehrey Par Unkey Masomiyat Aankhoon Mein Thi Thori Shararat Aur Baatoon Mein Woh Nazakat Kya Unka Rangeen Mizaaj Likhoon? Kuch Likhna chahata Hoon Sochta Hoon Kya Likhoon? Unka Aaker Muskurana Jo Rooth Jaon To Manana Jate Jate Phir Rulana Kya Unka Yeh Andaaz Likhoon? Kuch Likhna Chahata Hoon Sochta Hoon Kya Likhoon? Yaadoon Mein Unkey Ashk Bahana Her Shaam Ek Diya Jalana Soi Umeed Ko Roz Jagana Kya Unka Yeh Intezar Likhoon? Kuch Likhna Chahata Hoon Sochta Hoon Kya Likhon
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10-01-2013, 03:16 PM | #2 |
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Re: Kuch Likhna Chahata Hoon
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Kuch Likhna Chahata Hoon
Sochta Hoon Kya Likhoon ? Unka Aaker Muskurana Jo Rooth Jaon To Manana Jate Jate Phir Rulana Kya Unka Yeh Andaaz Likhoon? Kuch Likhna Chahata Hoon Sochta Hoon Kya Likhoon? दीपू जी, आपकी इस सुन्दर कविता के लिए बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद और बधाई. कविता में जहाँ आपने एक ही मनःस्थिति को भिन्न भिन्न दृश्यों के माध्यम से आदि से अंत तक निभाया है, वह वाकई कमाल है. शब्द-संयोजन भी प्रभावशाली है. |
10-01-2013, 03:29 PM | #3 |
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Re: Kuch Likhna Chahata Hoon
आपके इस असमंजस की स्थिति मे कविवर सोम ठाकुर की कुछ पंक्तियाँ पेश करता हूँ -
अगर तुम कवि हो तो मेरा ये निवेदन सुन लो, खोल कर कान जरा वक्त की धड़कन सुन लो। तुम ना प्यार और शृंगार लिखो गीतो मे, वक्त की मांग है अंगार लिखो गीतो मे। Last edited by arvind; 10-01-2013 at 03:38 PM. |
10-01-2013, 04:16 PM | #4 |
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..................... thanks ..........................
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10-01-2013, 06:38 PM | #5 |
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Kuch Likhna Chahata Hoon
Sochta Hoon Kya Likhoon ? Unka Aaker Muskurana Jo Rooth Jaon To Manana Jate Jate Phir Rulana Kya Unka Yeh Andaaz Likhoon? Kuch Likhna Chahata Hoon Sochta Hoon Kya Likhoon?
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