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Old 03-10-2016, 06:02 PM   #1
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Zindagi ki raaho mai bas mai chalti rahi,

Subah hoti rahi or sham bhi aati rahi,

Mai bas chalti rahi or yu hi chalti rahi.


Raste mai kai rishto ki bandishe aati rahi,

Pathrili rah pe kai mushkile bhi aati rahi,

Par mai bas ruki nahi or yu hi chalti rahi.


Aisa bhi nahi ki durd ki parchhaiya na rahi,

Thaheri rahi kisi raah pe or koi raah na rahi,

Par mai bas ruki nahi or yu hi chalti rahi.


Thakti rahi, ladkhadati or fir bhi uthti rahi,

Ek nayi ummid se manzil ki talash karti rahi,

Par Mai bas ruki nahi kahi or yu hi chalti rahi.


Ishq ki wafa e humesha mere saath rahi,

Haatho mai mere unki lakire saath rahi,

Shikha ruki nahi kahi or yu hi chalti rahi.

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zindagi ki raaho mai bas mai chalti rahi,

subah hoti rahi or sham bhi aati rahi,

mai bas chalti rahi or yu hi chalti rahi.


Raste mai kai rishto ki bandishe aati rahi,

pathrili rah pe kai mushkile bhi aati rahi,

par mai bas ruki nahi or yu hi chalti rahi.

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एक बढ़िया और मधुर गीत. इसमें कवि मन की स्पष्टता और दृढ़ निश्चय के साथ अपनी मंज़िल की ओर बढ़ते चले जाने की जिजीविषा नज़र आती है. इसमें पुरानी पीढ़ी की छटपटाहट नहीं बल्कि आज की पीढ़ी की कुछ कर गुजरने की प्रतिबद्धता दिखाई देती है. धन्यवाद, शिखा जी.
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एक बढ़िया और मधुर गीत. इसमें कवि मन की स्पष्टता और दृढ़ निश्चय के साथ अपनी मंज़िल की ओर बढ़ते चले जाने की जिजीविषा नज़र आती है. इसमें पुरानी पीढ़ी की छटपटाहट नहीं बल्कि आज की पीढ़ी की कुछ कर गुजरने की प्रतिबद्धता दिखाई देती है. धन्यवाद, शिखा जी.
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Default Re: Yu hi chalti rahi

Raste mai kai rishto ki bandishe aati rahi,

Pathrili rah pe kai mushkile bhi aati rahi,


सही कहा शिखा जी मानव जीवन कई चाहे अनचाहे घटनाक्रम के मुताबिक बनता चला जाता है फिर भी हिम्मत और साहस के साथ ही आगे बढ़े वो ही सच्चा योध्धा है जीवन में भले चाहे जितनी भी कठिनाइयाँ आये सबको पार कर ले एइसे कुछ भाव से बनी आपकी रचना बेहद तारीफे काबिल है
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raste mai kai rishto ki bandishe aati rahi,

pathrili rah pe kai mushkile bhi aati rahi,


सही कहा शिखा जी मानव जीवन कई चाहे अनचाहे घटनाक्रम के मुताबिक बनता चला जाता है फिर भी हिम्मत और साहस के साथ ही आगे बढ़े वो ही सच्चा योध्धा है जीवन में भले चाहे जितनी भी कठिनाइयाँ आये सबको पार कर ले एइसे कुछ भाव से बनी आपकी रचना बेहद तारीफे काबिल है
आपने इस कविता की सच में बहुत अच्छी समीक्षा की है. धन्यवाद, पुष्पा बहन.

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