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Old 08-01-2013, 10:59 AM   #1
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Old 10-01-2013, 03:16 PM   #2
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Kuch Likhna Chahata Hoon
Sochta Hoon Kya Likhoon ?

Unka Aaker Muskurana
Jo Rooth Jaon To Manana
Jate Jate Phir Rulana

Kya Unka Yeh Andaaz Likhoon?
Kuch Likhna Chahata Hoon
Sochta Hoon Kya Likhoon?



दीपू जी, आपकी इस सुन्दर कविता के लिए बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद और बधाई. कविता में जहाँ आपने एक ही मनःस्थिति को भिन्न भिन्न दृश्यों के माध्यम से आदि से अंत तक निभाया है, वह वाकई कमाल है. शब्द-संयोजन भी प्रभावशाली है.
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Old 10-01-2013, 03:29 PM   #3
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आपके इस असमंजस की स्थिति मे कविवर सोम ठाकुर की कुछ पंक्तियाँ पेश करता हूँ -

अगर तुम कवि हो तो मेरा ये निवेदन सुन लो,
खोल कर कान जरा वक्त की धड़कन सुन लो।
तुम ना प्यार और शृंगार लिखो गीतो मे,
वक्त की मांग है अंगार लिखो गीतो मे।

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Kuch Likhna Chahata Hoon
Sochta Hoon Kya Likhoon ?

Unka Aaker Muskurana
Jo Rooth Jaon To Manana
Jate Jate Phir Rulana

Kya Unka Yeh Andaaz Likhoon?
Kuch Likhna Chahata Hoon
Sochta Hoon Kya Likhoon?



दीपू जी, आपकी इस सुन्दर कविता के लिए बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद और बधाई. कविता में जहाँ आपने एक ही मनःस्थिति को भिन्न भिन्न दृश्यों के माध्यम से आदि से अंत तक निभाया है, वह वाकई कमाल है. शब्द-संयोजन भी प्रभावशाली है.
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आपके इस असमंजस की स्थिति मे कविवर सोम ठाकुर की कुछ पंक्तियाँ पेश करता हूँ -

अगर तुम कवि हो तो मेरा ये निवेदन सुन लो,
खोल कर कान जरा वक्त की धड़कन सुन लो।
तुम ना प्यार और शृंगार लिखो गीतो मे,
वक्त की मांग है अंगार लिखो गीतो मे।
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Kuch Likhna Chahata Hoon
Sochta Hoon Kya Likhoon ?

Unka Aaker Muskurana
Jo Rooth Jaon To Manana
Jate Jate Phir Rulana

Kya Unka Yeh Andaaz Likhoon?
Kuch Likhna Chahata Hoon
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