25-05-2017, 10:47 AM | #1 |
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Chaand mere ghar kabhi aaya he nahi
Kisi se roothne ki to baat he kanha thi, Koi safar me saath aaya he nahi! Nazren milne ki to baat he kanha thi, Ushki baaton me mera zikra kabhi aaya he nahi! Unse deedar ki to baat he kanha thi, Chaand mere ghar kabhi aaya he nahi! Baat khud se ho, yea baat he kanha thi, sath ab apne apna saya he nahi! |
26-05-2017, 04:38 PM | #2 |
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Re: Chaand mere ghar kabhi aaya he nahi
बहुत खूब. बहुत सुंदर. मधुर कविता. वाह! राहुल जी.
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04-06-2017, 06:45 PM | #3 |
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Re: Chaand mere ghar kabhi aaya he nahi
very very nice creation rahulji..
keep it up
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05-06-2017, 09:26 PM | #4 |
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Re: Chaand mere ghar kabhi aaya he nahi
Baat khud se ho, yea baat he kanha thi,
sath ab apne apna saya he nahi!.. bahut khoob ... sundar rachna .. dhanywad rahul ji ..badhaiyan |
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Re: Chaand mere ghar kabhi aaya he nahi
Quote:
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