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Old 17-02-2013, 12:42 AM   #1
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Post देख दुनिया तेरे बगैर दिखती कैसी है

ज़रा हमसे नज़रे मिलाओ तो सही,
देख दुनिया तेरे बगैर दिखती कैसी है....
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Old 17-02-2013, 12:44 AM   #2
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मुझे नीद कहाँ आती है तुझे देखे बगैर,
ख्वाबों में भी देखे हुए अरसे गुज़र गये....
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Old 17-02-2013, 12:48 AM   #3
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यूँ न देख इन कातिल निगाहों से,
बेहोश हो गया हू, जरा होश में तो आने दे....
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Old 21-02-2013, 02:14 PM   #4
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ज़रा हमसे नज़रे मिलाओ तो सही,
देख दुनिया तेरे बगैर दिखती कैसी है....
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मुझे नीद कहाँ आती है तुझे देखे बगैर,
ख्वाबों में भी देखे हुए अरसे गुज़र गये....
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यूँ न देख इन कातिल निगाहों से,
बेहोश हो गया हू, जरा होश में तो आने दे....


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bahoot achhe sher hai kripya jari rakhen john bhai
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