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Old 11-05-2015, 03:16 PM   #21
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अरे ये पढने से छूट कैसे गया?! गजब की पंक्तियाँ है। आजकल तो आप कमाल पर कमाल कर रही हैं। मुझे पहले से अनुमान था एक न एक दिन आप गजब की कविताएँ लिखेंगी। बधाईयाँ।

आप सबकी संगत का ही असर है ......
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Old 12-05-2015, 10:32 AM   #22
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उसके आने से जिन्दगी गुलजार हो जाये,
मैं आँखें खोलूँ और उसका दीदार हो जाये,
उसकी नजरों की इनायत इस तरह हो मुझ पर ,
कि मुझे खुद से ही प्यार हो जाये.....


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उसके आने से जिन्दगी गुलजार हो जाये,
मैं आँखें खोलूँ और उसका दीदार हो जाये,
उसकी नजरों की इनायत इस तरह हो मुझ पर ,
कि मुझे खुद से ही प्यार हो जाये.....





sach ek ke bad ek achhi rachnayen likhin aapne pavitra ji bahut sundar wordings hain aapki harek kavita ke .. shairing ke liye bahut bahut dhanywad ...
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उसके आने से जिन्दगी गुलजार हो जाये,

मैं आँखें खोलूँ और उसका दीदार हो जाये,
उसकी नजरों की इनायत इस तरह हो मुझ पर ,
कि मुझे खुद से ही प्यार हो जाये.....


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अच्छी शायरी है ।
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Old 13-05-2015, 06:09 PM   #27
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उसके आने से जिन्दगी गुलजार हो जाये,
मैं आँखें खोलूँ और उसका दीदार हो जाये,
उसकी नजरों की इनायत इस तरह हो मुझ पर ,
कि मुझे खुद से ही प्यार हो जाये.....


वाह-वाह, क्या बात है, पवित्रा जी। एक से बढकर एक शायरी कह रही है आजकल आप। ऐसा बहुत कम देखा और सुना गया। पहले शून्य थे, फिर अचानक चमत्कार पर चमत्कार करने लगे। मेरा दिल कहता है अभी आप और चमत्कार करेगी। बधाइयाँ।
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क्यों तेरी बलिहारी हूँ?



ये सोच-सोच कर हारी हूँ
कि क्यों तेरी बलिहारी हूँ?

सोवत जागत ध्यान तिहारा
क्यों लगने लगा तू खुद से प्यारा

क्या मैं भी तेरी प्यारी हूँ?

ये सोच-सोच कर हारी हूँ
कि क्यों तेरी बलिहारी हूँ?

जाने कितने बरसों से राहें तेरी तकती हूँ,
हर पल तुझको याद करूँ, नाम जपत ना थकती हूँ ,

डूब चुकी थी अश्रु सागर में ,तेरे नाम से ही अब तारी हूँ

ये सोच-सोच कर हारी हूँ
कि क्यों तेरी बलिहारी हूँ?
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मुझे आपकी रचना बहूत अच्छी लगी!
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Ati sundar kavita, Pavitra ji. Kintu agar is kavita ko is style men pesh kiya jata to char chand lag jata.
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