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Old 19-07-2016, 11:38 PM   #1
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खुद को तू बेहाल न रख


खुद को तू बेहाल न रख
जीवन में जंजाल न रख

खुद ही इसमें फंस जायेगा
अपने घर में जाल न रख

रोक लगा ले लोभ पे भाई
अंदर इतना माल न रख

मना किया था लाख तुझे
अरहर की तू दाल न रख

गोटी उलटी पड़ सकती है
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इतनी मोटी खाल न रख
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ग़ज़ल लाइक करने के लिये बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद, बहन पुष्पा जी.

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सुन्दर ग़ज़ल हमसे शेयर करने के लिए हार्दिक आभार भाई .. बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद
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Old 30-08-2016, 06:00 PM   #5
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खुद को तू बेहाल न रख


खुद को तू बेहाल न रख
जीवन में जंजाल न रख

खुद ही इसमें फंस जायेगा
अपने घर में जाल न रख

रोक लगा ले लोभ पे भाई
अंदर इतना माल न रख

मना किया था लाख तुझे
अरहर की तू दाल न रख

गोटी उलटी पड़ सकती है
नजूमियों का फ़ाल न रख
वक़्त की लाठी से तू डर
इतनी मोटी खाल न रख
वाह ! वाह क्या बात है !! छोटी बह्र में बहुत ही उम्दा ग़ज़ल !!
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वाह ! वाह क्या बात है !! छोटी बह्र में बहुत ही उम्दा ग़ज़ल !!
बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद, हातिम जावेद साहब. आप जैसे श्रेष्ठ शायर से प्रशंसा मिलना मेरे लिये बहुत बड़ी बात है.

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