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Old 26-06-2011, 05:01 PM   #1
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डायरी वर्षों की हमने,आँसुओं से हैं लिखीं ;
चन्द खुश लम्हें हैं , पर सप्ताह में इतवार से .
हुस्न के कदमों
में , जब भी इश्क का दावा किया ;
मुफ्लिसों की तरह , दामन भर गया दुत्कार से .
लोग ढूँढा ही किये ,
मुझमें मसालेदार खबरें ;
दोस्तों को हम नज़र आए,सदा अखबार
से .
मुल्क की सेहत का बीड़ा , हमनें सौंपा
था जिन्हें ;
बाद में
ख़ुद नज़र आए , वो सदा बीमार से .
हम नहीं सत्ता के बेटे , जो सदन में गूँज हो ;
एक दिन चुपके से हम , जायेंगे इस संसार से .
जो कोई इतिहास लिखते आए हैं संसार का ;
हाशिये की तरह, हमको छोड़ देंगे मार के .


रचनाकार ~~ डॉ. राकेश श्रीवास्तव
लखनऊ ,इंडिया .

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Old 26-06-2011, 06:54 PM   #2
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Old 26-06-2011, 11:24 PM   #3
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Old 26-06-2011, 11:28 PM   #4
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Old 27-06-2011, 07:25 AM   #5
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Old 29-06-2011, 03:24 PM   #6
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डायरी वर्षों की हमने,आँसुओं से हैं लिखीं ;
चन्द खुश लम्हें हैं , पर सप्ताह में इतवार से .
हुस्न के कदमों में , जब भी इश्क का दावा किया ;
मुफ्लिसों की तरह , दामन भर गया दुत्कार से .
लोग ढूँढा ही किये , मुझमें मसालेदार खबरें ;
दोस्तों को हम नज़र आए,सदा अखबार से .
मुल्क की सेहत का बीड़ा , हमनें सौंपा था जिन्हें ;
बाद में ख़ुद नज़र आए , वो सदा बीमार से .
हम नहीं सत्ता के बेटे , जो सदन में गूँज हो ;
एक दिन चुपके से हम , जायेंगे इस संसार से .
जो कोई इतिहास लिखते आए हैं संसार का ;
हाशिये की तरह, हमको छोड़ देंगे मार के .

रचनाकार ~~ डॉ. राकेश श्रीवास्तव
लखनऊ ,इंडिया .
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Old 29-06-2011, 03:27 PM   #7
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aap ki gazal bahut achchi hai. Aap to chupe rustam nikle.
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डायरी वर्षों की हमने,आँसुओं से हैं लिखीं ;
चन्द खुश लम्हें हैं , पर सप्ताह में इतवार से .
हुस्न के कदमों
में , जब भी इश्क का दावा किया ;
मुफ्लिसों की तरह , दामन भर गया दुत्कार से .
लोग ढूँढा ही किये ,
मुझमें मसालेदार खबरें ;

दोस्तों को हम नज़र आए,सदा अखबार
से .
मुल्क की सेहत का बीड़ा , हमनें सौंपा
था जिन्हें ;
बाद में
ख़ुद नज़र आए , वो सदा बीमार से .
हम नहीं सत्ता के बेटे , जो सदन में गूँज हो ;
एक दिन चुपके से हम , जायेंगे इस संसार से .
जो कोई इतिहास लिखते आए हैं संसार का ;
हाशिये की तरह, हमको छोड़ देंगे मार के .


रचनाकार ~~ डॉ. राकेश श्रीवास्तव
लखनऊ ,इंडिया .

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aap ki gazal bahut achchi hai. Aap to chupe rustam nikle.
आपको ऐसा क्यों लगा सिंह जी कि डा. साहब छुपे रुस्तम निकलें? क्या आपको ज्ञात नहीं था कि श्री डा. साहब एक मजे हुए सशक्त रचनाकार हैं?
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