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Old 25-12-2012, 08:25 PM   #1
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कलियुग ही क्यों ?

कलियुग ही क्यों ?
सतयुग में भी तो हरिश्चंद्र
सत्य बोल कर कष्ट
सहा करते हैं.

कलियुग ही क्यों ?
त्रेता में भी तो रावण
जन्म लिया करते हैं.

कलियुग ही क्यों ?
द्वापर में भी दुर्योधन
कंस आदि उपजा करते हैं.

बेचारे कलियुग को ही क्यों
निंदा का पात्र
बनाया जाता है ?

अंदर और बाहर
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Old 25-12-2012, 08:38 PM   #2
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अंदर और बाहर
आज जितनी रोशनी है
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Old 25-12-2012, 09:09 PM   #3
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सुन्दर कविता है ...
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Old 26-12-2012, 06:17 PM   #4
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सुन्दर अभिव्यक्ति है बन्धु, हार्दिक अभिनन्दन है।
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कलियुग ही क्यों ?
सतयुग में भी तो हरिश्चंद्र
सत्य बोल कर कष्ट
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बहुत सही ,... अति उत्तम..... thanks for shairing
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कलियुग ही क्यों ?

कलियुग ही क्यों ?
सतयुग में भी तो हरिश्चंद्र
सत्य बोल कर कष्ट
सहा करते हैं.

कलियुग ही क्यों ?
त्रेता में भी तो रावण
जन्म लिया करते हैं.

कलियुग ही क्यों ?
द्वापर में भी दुर्योधन
कंस आदि उपजा करते हैं.

बेचारे कलियुग को ही क्यों
निंदा का पात्र
बनाया जाता है ?

अंदर और बाहर
आज जितनी रोशनी है
उधार की नहीं
अपनी है.

जितनी कालिमा है
अधिकतर है उधार की -
कल की, परसों की, वर्षों की
संचित है.

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"कलियुग ही क्यों?" नामक मेरी कविता को पसंद करने व् उस पर अपनी प्रशंसात्मक टिप्पणी देने के लिये मैं अभिषेक जी, सोमबीर नामदेव जी, बिंदु जी, भाई जय भारद्वाज जी, रफीक जी, सोनी पुष्पा जी और टीच गुरू का हृदय से आभार व्यक्त करता हूँ. इनके अतिरिक्त अन्य जाने-अनजाने मित्रों का भी धन्यवाद जिन्होंने इस पन्ने को विज़िट किया तथा उक्त रचना को मान दिया.
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