30-01-2015, 01:45 PM | #1 |
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Woh phir se aaj jindgi se udas hai
bata jindgi tu kya rang layegi samajh na paya ham me se koi to tum kya mujhe samajh payogi dard diya hai is sine mein us ke kyo tune hai us ko rulaya intezzar hai mujko us ka tum ne kyo na mujhe us se milaya mil hi jau ga ab m us se ab tum kya anjam dogi bata , e jindgi is tute dil ko tune hasna bhi na shikhaya |
30-01-2015, 03:26 PM | #2 |
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Re: Woh phir se aaj jindgi se udas hai
Very nice bhai
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Re: Woh phir se aaj jindgi se udas hai
एक वियोगी ह्रदय की भावनाओं को आपने बहुत सुंदर अभिव्यक्ति दी है, अनमोल जी. लेकिन कहीं न कहीं आशा की एक किरण भी इन पंक्तियों में नज़र आती है:
mil hi jaunga ab me us se (मिल ही जाऊँगा अब मैं उससे) बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद, मित्र.
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13-02-2015, 05:11 PM | #5 |
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